Raidant dawn ( the begining of the end)

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Axel pulls up a nearby manhole cover while no one looks, he jumps down and lands right in front ot loke, a splash of waste cover loke "You again?" Axel looks up and sees someone covering the manhole turning everything pitch black "Got a match?"
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Loke: { he lights a match and notices who it is} AHH!!!! your the theif from the alley what are you doing here { creatures surround him} look out { he gets into a fighting stance}
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Leon: hmmm n-no way! they changed the time! i need three more people to join or my guild gets shut down.... thats no fair
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"Let me handle this." The match goesout and all that is heard is the sound of punches kicks squeals of pain than a snapping noise followed by ripping and tearing sounds than there is silence "Got a match?"
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Loke: { he lights a match and lights the lantern hes carrying and sees the monster} wow ohhhh man look at that { they continue walking through the sewers as a little boy runs past them} .....huh? hey that must be her brother { a machine liek monster robot bashes through the wall and targets axel and loke} ..................eh? { the machine heads right for them as loke gets into a fighting stance} ohhh crap its coming right for us
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Dart: sounds like some theives are in the sewer.... guess ill check it out
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Loke: { he rerembers the girls face as he mans up} ALLRIGHT THEIF LETS TAKE CARE OF THIS THING IT though what the hell is a machina doing here { he punches the machina in the chest causeing absoultly no damage as the machina fires a beam of formed from the magic core at loke and axel as they both manage to dodge} RAHHHH { he kicks the machina into the boiler room} AXEL AIM FOR THE LEGS!!!!!!!!!!!!! { he jumps takes a hit and gets knocked into the wall}
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Axel pulls out two daggers "Serious time." Axel slashes a joint of the machine spins around quickly and kicks one of the machines legs sparks fly out "Ow I hurt my leg." Axel is hit next to Loke "aim for the spot I kicked, should be weaker now." Axel gets up and twirls the daggers around
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Loke: HA! DEMON FIST! { he punches as a wave flys at the machine knocking the machine into the boiler causing it to over heat} ......AHHH!!!!! CRAP FINISH THIS QUICK { he jumps up and he punches his fist through the head of the mech and rips the camera out of it as axel finishes it by cutting through the chest} ohhh no its too late { the boiler exploads causing the sewers to go crazy as axel and loke gets washed away}


Imperial soldiers: WHAT WAS THE NOISE { head to where the noise is and see loke and axel}

Loke: i-Imperial soldiers!?

Imperial soldier general: STAND UP NOW!'

Loke: b-bbut wait its not what you think it was a machina it was running lose just ask the kid { he notices the kids long gone} t-that brat!

Imperial soldier general: dont say anything youll have alot of time to think about what youve done { the imperial soldiers arrest loke and axel and they take them to the castle and on their way to the castle they pass uhura and dart on the way and they make it to the dungeon and they get tossed into the cell as their equipment was taken away} wait in here till we decide what to do with you 2

Loke: WAIT IM INNOCENT COME ON LISTEN!!!! { he just crawls into the corner} I'm gonna die I'm gonna die I'm gonna die in here............ we blew up the sewer were getting the death sentance labeled as traitors
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She feels a slight trembaling from the ground
"What was that?" She sighed."Oh well..." She turned aorund from the board and walks away
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Axel pulls out a tin cup and bangs on the metal cage "Relax I've been here a few times, by the way, I don't think I told you my name." Asder starts banging more "I'm Asder, so who are you?"
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[walks in to the cell disguised as a guard]
Leon:your the ones from the alley! i mean this way prisoners

[whispers to asder]


leon: don't worry i'll get yall outta here
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soldiers: { walk in} allright you 2 the king wishes to see you

Loke: .............Loke thats my name...... dont bust us out we'll get into even more trouble

SOldiers: what are you mumbling about lets go you 2 { grabs loke and axel and hand cuff them as their brought to the throne room}

King: ..............


Loke: y-your highness { he lowers his head{

King: raise your head boy I heard from the general you encounter a machina

Loke: y-yeah

King:................allright fine if you two will do a favor for me then i'll consider letting them go

knight: but your highness be reasonible they destoryed the sewer something like fighting a machina and succeding with only a lowly theif and some KID!

Loke: k-kid...................

King: anyway so you 2 I want you both to head to dead mans spire if what you said was true then this should be a cake for you none of our knight we sent their have come back I have high hopes for your return



Loke: awww you really think we can do something like that..... WAIT NO theirs no way

King: youll also recive a 30,000 gilda reward

Loke: anything for the kingdom

King: wonderful then you'll set out once you leave this castle { points to leon} you knight escort them out of the castle
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Soldier: he's no knight

[he pulled the helm of leons head]

Soldiers: l-lord Leon!

[they all bow even the king]

Leon: whoops well lets go erhm p-prisoners!

[whispers]

lets get the hell outta here before seifer shows up!
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Loke: { walks out and is psyched to start the mission but then realizes} ohh crap only the 2 of us at dead mans spire were gonna die dammit why did I agree to this we dont stand a chance there
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Leon: haha i used to travel there when i was a kid, its near sel- ummm my hometown.....i'll go with yall.....
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crap, he's gonna want a share of the reward, damn dragon freak. Axel sighs "Why would the king bow to a commoner like you, it makes no sence." Axel sees a table with Loke and Axel's stuff on it "Dont worry about dying, as long as you use that fist thing you will be fine, I might even be able to show off one of my techniques."
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Loke: trust me im no fighter { he puts his gloves on as he throws his bag on his shoulder} yeah Im alittle curious about that myself and you dont know that dead man spires is incredibly dangerous even for a experienced warrior... { he spots axel and then they oth spark an idea} okay were gonna die with just the three of us sooooooo { him and axel run up and uhura and basically kidnap her and bring her back} okay heres the deal { he explains the mission} ohh and also the reward is 30,00 gilda
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leon: join my guild and you can keep the reward
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
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Take me back to the land,
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Loke: ................* hmm perdictament im a merchant so i have to travel so i cant stay in this city for long but it is the biggest city on the continent which means I get to keep this reward and also make money for potential customers which means ALL THE MONEY IN THE WORLD IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!* sure why not but I keep the reward I have to split it with this guy over here
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