Raidant dawn ( the begining of the end)

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Raidant dawn ( the begining of the end)

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hey people im bored and thought I try something different normally im into the dark average day supernatural demon slaying robot stuff but you know i gonna try making a rp set in a fantasy type of world I tried once before but I have a decent feeling about this dont rips my face off if the storys not that great it may be turned into a game usuing rpg maker xp or I may make it into a manga

story: the land of gaia prosperous at peace the people are all living happily the main form of work is withing the merchant business and within guilds their are guilds for all kind of people theifs knights swordsman bounty hunters merchants you name it the kingdom of fiore is the biggest city on the country of filgaia it is where most of the guilds are located the members of these guilds are sent out on jobs for them to perform so they can collect their money and make a living all belive the world is at peace but what their unaware of is that their is a group of individuals planning to overthrow the government and they wish to forge the future how they wish it using the lost technology of the ancients known as machina these machines were used in the hundred year war it is unfortunate that a young merchant has just found his way to fiore looking for a guild to join its unfortunate for him that over the next few days hes going to be forced into a long and hard battle for the future of gaia and all its people


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no sexuall racist things you know the usual
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classes: priest fighter swordsman mage acolyte theif archer merchant Ill add more as the story progresses

2nd level classes: exorcist monk adventurer crusader grand mage healer Ill think of more

for example after a certain point youll have the choice to upgrade your class priest to exorcist fighter to monk swordsman to adventurer kinght to crusader etc
if you need the classes described pm me

chara template:
name:
age:
gender:
class:
appearance:
bio/personality

everyone will start in fiore and then move to different cities as the story progresses

my chara:
name: Loke
age: 16
gender: male
class: Fighter but has some theif abbilities
appearance: Image
bio/personality: he just a traveling merchant whos kinda shy awkward and really clumsy at first glance theirs not much too him he travels from country to country looking for business he was resitantly mugged by a bunch of theifs which is why he doesnt have any of his merchandise with him all he has is that little bag on his back he rathers ti avoid fights and to most people around him hes incredibly weak and a waste of time and to most people they see him as a novice with no particular class
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Name: leon
age 17
gender m
class ex-dragoon knight
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bio escaped from the prison he's trying to create a guild in order to restore peace to his old town seles that was ransacked set aflame and most inhabitants were destroyed and most of the villagers were killed trying to rise up against seifers guild revanent wings thats goal is to take over the world,

Name seifer
age 17
gender m
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bio leon and seifer were friends born into seles not many know much about him, owner of the awesomely awesome guild revenant wings
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Name: Axel
age: 17
class: theif
appearence: Image
bio: Axel roams the streets making his way mostly by pickpocketing merchants his parents abandon him when he was young and the theifs guild took him in and raised him into a potential assasin or better.
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Ill start once 2 more people join but in a extreme case Ill join after one more person joins
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Name: Uhura
age: 16
class: Theif
Apperence: (I'll add one later)
Bio: Always wondering around the city and place to place trying to make a liveing. She is always willing to help travelers. For a small Fee of course.
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( Ill start it shugo lover will post her pic when she can and anyone can join anytime through out it)

Loke: { walking through the city and people are passing out fliers to join the guilds} *sigh* I cant believe all of my merchandise was stolen { he sits on the fountain in the center of the city and people are bussling and traveling around in groups} { he reaches into his pocket and he pulls out a tiny bag full of only 10 gilda ( currency) } man this sucks I need to somehow get my hands on some money and merchandise.......maybe I should looks around the city { he walks off from the fountain}
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She stood in the back alley. The stone streets hard agenst her torn shoes.
"Dang..."
She stood there sorting threw the money in her hands.
"Only 3 gila" she sighed. "gAh!" one of the pieces fell out of her hand and started rolling away down a sewer.
"Dang..."
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[begins walking around town, if he wanted,which he did, to get the guild up an runnin he was going to need members but he couldn't possibly hand out flier like the sorry merchant across from him]

Leon:seifer..... a lots changed since seles was built for us
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Axel was sitting on a street corner as soon as he saw a merchant he would stand up and before the merchant knew it, his wallet was missing I think today is going well. so far four merchants and not one of the suspected me. Axel opens the wallets and empties them all onto the grouns, he starts counting twenty-four, twenty-five, twenty-six... Axel grins thirty-two gila "Ha, this is great." Axel throws the wallets into a dumpster and puts the gila into his pocket with his hands covering his pockets to assure himself it would not be stolen
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Loke: after wandering he stumbles upon a quest board and he sees a request to catch a band of theifs that have been terrorizing the merchant guild and he immediatly takes it seeing the amount for the reward} ohhh score! but wait I should find someone to help maybe theirs someone in the need of cash in this area { he stumbles upon the alleyway with axel standing in it} *ohhh crap* sorry wrong turn { he backs up slowly}
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She sadly walks threw the Alley passing the two. Her shoulders sagging and her back bend. Walking like the end was near.
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Axel stares at loke "Hey, you lost?" Axel takes a step towards Loke "I'll help you find your way, for the right price." Axel grins
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Loke: uhhh ohhh nooo sorry I made a wrong turn my bad just get back to your business sorry besides i dont have any money { he runs off and bumps into uhura} oh sorry { axel grabs him} ahhhh come on let me go I dont have any money literally but I have an idea you can get money if you help mje with this! { he holds up the quest paper} theres got to be money lieing around the place I mean if theifs are hanging out there
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[jumps next to loke and drew his sword laying it on axels neck]

leon: are you that poor that you must steal so much gila from merchants that actually do something for a living

[he held up the gila that axel had stolen]
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Axel ducks under the sword and uppercuts leon and takes back the money "**** you don't steal back gila from me, got that?" Axel turns to loke "relax i wasn't going to rob you, but i suppose i can put that gila to good use." Axel's mind seems to drift off aas he thinks about food he starts to drool "Steak..."
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"Damn..." she sighed watching them fight. "Guess non of them have any money..." she sighed.
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leon: were you planning on taking that quest i actually just finished that one

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Loke: ..................... ah man this sucks { he runs off because of the chaos} *huff huff huff huff* { he makes it a safe distance away and a girl runs up to him}

girl: please mister you have to help my brother he went into the sewers to scare off the stray monsters down there hes just a kid he doesnt know what hes doing

Loke: { turns around} I'm sorry but Im no fi-{ he sees the girls face up close} yes maam I understand dont worry I'll be strong enough to take of the myself

{ the girl leads him to the entrance as he goes down and he is immediatly attacjed by a small group of slime}

Loke: ahh! { he gets into a fighting stance}
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Axel leaves with his bag of gila, double Checked to make sure none of it was missing "I don't have time to waste on you when I could be off making some money." he hears noises coming out of a sewer drain "What is that noise?"
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{ the slimes proceed to attack loke}

Loke: crap here they come { punches one of the slimes and then he kicks the2nd slime and he finishes it off by punching it into a wall} phew that was close it could of been bad now where could that kid be { he wanders through out the sewer as he fights through any slimes in his way}
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