I need oppinions!!!!

[Shiori]

ok so I was looking at poems a few days ago and I thought those little pokemon poems were really cute, so I decided I wanted to write my boyfriend a poem, but not with pokemon but *drumroll* ...... Call of Duty! So this is what I came up with its free verse because it would be hard to ryme guns but here you go let me know what you guys think....

I love you more than my AK47
Like akimboed Scorpions were better together than alone.
My heart beats for you louder than a Striker blast
You shine brighter than a Flash bang
You soar higher than a Javalin
Your hotter than a Bouncing betty blast
You stun me like a Cuncusion gernade
Your better than a Drugunov gold
My love for you is as solid as a Riot shield
My heart is stuck to just like a Semtex
Baby, were cunnected just like a C4 to a detinator switch
And together were as unbeatable as a Juggernaut so bring on the world!

[AZURE-KITE]

We can put your poem into the RPs forums of japan and call of duty's creators room to makeit usefull aaaaand it's gone!....

And i tough i was weird.... Well, i find it good ^^ you should show it to him

[Shiori]

Um thanks I think? ^_^;

[TheSorrow]

I know a couple of friends who would instantly ask you to marry them the moment they'd read this.
And i probably would too, if i loved Call of Duty that much.
And if your boyfriend is a problem, then it's nothing that won't be settled in a good old Hardcore Search and Destroy.

But srsly, it is a GREAT poem!! XD For someone who knows about Call of Duty, this is so very wonderful and creative...for someone who LOVES Call of Duty, i believe it'll be the most wonderful piece of literature they've ever seen. lol

The only thing that i can't ignore, is the typos and misspellings. They're probably just in this post due to fast typing, and probably the actual poem you'll show him is all well-typed with no errors, but still, i'll fix the errors here for you ;P

I love you more than my AK47
Like akimboed Scorpions we're better together than alone.
My heart beats for you louder than a Striker blast
You shine brighter than a Flash bang
You soar higher than a Javelin
You're hotter than a Bouncing betty blast
You stun me like a Concussion grenade
You're better than a Dragunov gold
My love for you is as solid as a Riot shield
My heart is stuck to just like a Semtex
Baby, we're connected just like a C4 to a detonator switch
And together we're as unbeatable as a Juggernaut so bring on the world!

[Shiori]

I know a couple of friends who would instantly ask you to marry them the moment they'd read this.
And i probably would too, if i loved Call of Duty that much.
And if your boyfriend is a problem, then it's nothing that won't be settled in a good old Hardcore Search and Destroy.

But srsly, it is a GREAT poem!! XD For someone who knows about Call of Duty, this is so very wonderful and creative...for someone who LOVES Call of Duty, i believe it'll be the most wonderful piece of literature they've ever seen. lol

The only thing that i can't ignore, is the typos and misspellings. They're probably just in this post due to fast typing, and probably the actual poem you'll show him is all well-typed with no errors, but still, i'll fix the errors here for you ;P

I love you more than my AK47
Like akimboed Scorpions we're better together than alone.
My heart beats for you louder than a Striker blast
You shine brighter than a Flash bang
You soar higher than a Javelin
You're hotter than a Bouncing betty blast
You stun me like a Concussion grenade
You're better than a Dragunov gold
My love for you is as solid as a Riot shield
My heart is stuck to just like a Semtex
Baby, we're connected just like a C4 to a detonator switch
And together we're as unbeatable as a Juggernaut so bring on the world!

Awwl thanks and its good to hear that you think he will like it. ^_^ And no it was just purely written I came up with it at 11 last night so I didn't really worry about spelling at the time and just wanted to get thoughts on paper. But thanks for editing it for me ^_^ I was planing on doing that after I got a few oppinions on it.