Hello,
I'm currently working on a .hack fanfiction that will end up becoming a trilogy. It is a complete rewrite of a story I began many years ago. However, I'm currently have trouble with making sure all the information makes sense. It is indeed hard to write a story with only one set of eyes examining the information.
Therefor, I'm looking for someone who might be willing to critique the writing that I have done so far for it. Thank you for looking and respond in a post or private message me if you believe you can handle taking it on.
Thank you for reading,
Helbaworshipper
Beta-reader Request
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Helbaworshipper
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Beta-reader Request
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shugo_lover
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Re: Beta-reader Request
I'm not much of a critic, but I would be more than happy to give you my honest opinion on it.
