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Black scrawl (remake)

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I felt i let this one die way to early it was still in its infancy so I'll give it another go

Story: "The world is dieing.....the sun barely ever sets any more. Theres been an outbreak of demonic attacks by creatures known as shades the only thing left fighting for is for your own survival.......in this world their is no god if their was why why why!?..would he let us all suffer like this!......the shades arent even the worst part theirs a plague spreading throughout this world it infects the body and blood and turns human beings into monsters much like the shades...theirs a fight going on in this world most people barely fight for a reason now they just fight because they want too something about it gives them a rush I suppose..or they want to survive they'll sacrifice others if it means their own survival.....my sister is the only one I have left......shes sick with the plague I'm struggling to find a cure but I cant find one anywhere thankfully the Priest of a secluded village have helped us by allowing us to seek refuge within his church this church is the only place I can ever call home...though before I knew it this small time of peace for us is coming to an end.....my sisters condition is getting worse and worse with each passing day....I cant give up hope there has to be a cure out there some where I know there is!"

rules: no sexist or racist comments
no cybering
the usual stuff
and have fun

this is like a dark rp placed in a dieing world with no hope of survival and young man fights not for the sake of the world or justice hes fighting to save his sister it will also take place over like a 5 yr period like their will be a time skip within it


character template
name
age
weapon(s)
abbilities
class: anything ya want just not over the top
bio:
appearance:

my character
name: Chrono
age: 14
weapons: his fathers weapon hes unsure as to what type of weapon it actually is
abbilities: dark phantasm- creates a doppleganger from darkness to slice through his opponents can create up to 4 dopplegangers dark lance- weilds the power of darkness to form lances can create up to 12 but hes too weak at the moment dark execution- causes dark spears to uplift from the ground impaling alll of his enemies and dark hand- forms a dark hand from the abyss to smash opponents can create 4
class: shade slayer
bio: explained above really but
alone within the dieing world the only family he has left is his little sister he'll do anything or any job so he can live to support his sister who has been infected with the plague he wishes to find a cure for her despite his age after what hes seen and gone through hes quite mature for his age and he may look soft on the outside but he'll kill any shade or anyone he sees if it will
lead to finding a cure for his sisters disease
app: Image

after the 5 year gap app: the guy in the center also the book is weiss Image
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Re: Black scrawl (remake)

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Hmmmm, looks interesting....

name: Pharos
age: 16
weapon(s): A Shadow Death Scythe
abbilities: Death Touch- It destroy the affected from the inside and it explodes, leaving only shadows
Teleport- He teleports behind the enemy and it tear it to pieces with hi scythe or his Fangs
Abbys Fangs- His nails tansform into Fangs and he starts slashing the enemy until it is completely Teared to pieces
class: Lonely Hunter
bio: Unknow
appearance: Image
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Re: Black scrawl (remake)

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((Glad you started this one again))


name: Valeria
age: Appears to be 16
weapon(s): Gun dual blade she found and repaired
abilities: N/A
class: Shade Hunter
bio: Lost and alone. She wonders through the dieing world. Looking for someone. Finding life hard sense anyone and everyone is an enemy. And her own curse she has to worry about. Thinking it could be the plague she desperately fights the shades finding a way for a cure before she horribly and slowly changes into one.
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Re: Black scrawl (remake)

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((i'll join in tomorrow))
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
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Re: Black scrawl (remake)

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((prologue))

{ summer though its snowing heavily}

{man sitting against a book case in a abandoned library type building dressed up in a hoodie and heavy genes and boots holding a rusting iron pipe close to him}....................." STUPID F*CKING SHADES!" { kicks a book across the floor way from him he hears a voice ring through out his head}.." power........use my power to save whats important to you.all I wish for in return.....is your soul".......{ he looks up and its about a 19 yr old looking chrono} dammit more shades { he stands up as shades appear} come on { he fights his way through the small group that has appeared and he hears coughing from behind the book shelf} ...Kira! { he runs behind the shelf and theirs a girl about 13 yrs of age coughing} "ohh hey brother" { she stands up} what is it......the older chrono just looks at her and places a smile on his face " its nothing kira just you must be getting hungry right".....{ the girl just looks at him} yeah but I have this cookie which I really want to share with you big brother...we can split it.........."okay yeah sure that sounds great Im just going to go look for some water ill be right back kira and what ever you do do not touch that book { he points to a white book} no matter what allright promise me......." okay big brother" good girl { he runs out out from the book case only to encounter more shades}..dammit it theirs soo many! WHY HERE!? { he readies the pipe as he starts fighting the shades} come on I'll rip you APART! { he gets knocked into the wall but he just jumps off the wall and beats down another shade} Stay...AWAY!.....From KIRA!... { he gets hit a few times but he retailiates} BACK OFF! { he gets knocked to the ground}........gah!.......dammit { he crawls over to the book he kicked earlier} I..need power.........I need to protect...... MY SISTER!!!!! { his hand makes contact with the book} all of a sudden a hand from darkness appears and swats the shades away and out the window and the man looks out the window to see an army of shades}......come on! { he starts plowing through the shades with his new found power...and once he clears up the army of shades he hears a scream} ...no! KIRA! KIRA KIRA KIRA!!!!!!

{ chrono at his current age of 14 wakes up}

Chrono: { his hands are shaking}........what.......what was that dream

( the story will pick up with when valeria and chrono return from the Aerie or it will start from the very beginning pm me where you think it should start))
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((Ok so if u don't mind i will post my introuction as well))
Lying in the cold ground he is staring at the Azure sky "*Sigh* Well, at least there is something to do here" A shade appears running from behind "What the?!" he jumps into his feet and he steps back "What the hell? another one? take!" He slashes it and kicks it ten grabs the shade and throw it into the ground then slashes it into the air, then the Shade falls dead "Phew.... Well, that's all for today" He fells in the ground again and looks at the sky, at a farest view, it can be seen Shades dead all around him
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were starting tomorrow
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( lets start people people can just jump in if anyone else joins)

Chrono: { he opens the door to his house} Kira you stay good allright the father will be over in awhile to check up on you

Kira:....{ age of 10} okay big brother you have to go work again

Chrono: I know Im sorry I hate leaving u like this...

Kira: its okay big brother I understand you have go beat up the shades! go get them big brother

Chrono: you got it! { he walks out the door with his weapon on his back he streches} *yawn* allright { he starts walking towards the villages library its the biggest building in the village and he walks past the mastersons mansion and he enters the library and goes to the 2nd floor and enters the office} you wanted to see me Stella?

stella: ohh yes thats right its about a job... the village is afraid of a potential attack from the shades but also a young boy went missing 3 days ago...we thought it was just a regular case but he was last scene in the lost shrine

Chrono: ...But!? how?

Stella: were not sure but the reward is 1000 G

chrono: I dont need a reward im going

Stella: please wait....Its going to be dangerous atleast take this with you { she hands chrono a vile with a red liquid in it}

Chrono: thanks { he walks out of the library}
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((So, we start everyone on his own?))
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((pretty much u can place pharos in the same village))
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(Ok so im searching for the boy... Is it ok?)
He walked to a bridge "A boy went missing you know.... 3 Days ago... in the lost shrine... I just heared that from a man in black.." An old man said to Pharos "So, Shades are involved in it?" " it seems the case.... Go ahead, get some fun..." Pharos nodded, then ran to the lost shrine "Ok so this was the place" He starts searching for any marks in the ground, walls or for any clue about the boy "If 'they' are involve in this there should be any claw marks...." he entered the shrine and searched for more marks in there
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( yeah)

Chrono: { he leaves the village as he heads towards the lost shrine as he makes it to the entrance and he looks up at it)......{ he notices shades}....Damn why here { he draws his weapon} LETS GO!....I have to hurry { he runs and he starts cutting through any shades that get in his way}
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He could hear footsteps and Shades crying and dying "What the?...." he ran out of the shrine "Want any help?" he ran and jumped to him "I see your fighting them, you might be searching for that boy right?, then lemme help'ya" he started slashing the shades, he teleported behind them and ripped them off
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Chrono: * Tch*...Don;t get in my way { he slices through the shades} so eager to slay them I'll let you handle this { he runs into the shrine as he sees the stairs} * if their are shades here then that boy's introuble* .....{ more shades appear on the stairs as chrono goes up he tightens his grip on his weapon} RAAAAAHH { he jumps into the air} Get out of my WAY!!!!
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"... What the hell!!?" he saw the boy running inside the shrine "Oh no, your not getting away! why do i have to do all this work?!" his nails growed and transformed into claws, then his hand were all covered with darkness, he slashed the Shades, and the other minus shades got away running, then he returned to normal, and walked inside the shrine and saw the boy fighting with shades, he jumped passing them and started searching for the zone he was missing
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Chrono: { after he slays the shades he walks up the stairs}...god what is with this stair case! { he walks through a door that leads outside}....what the{ theirs a spiraling wooden bridge around the shrine and he starts walking on the bridge to the top}
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