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Elements of the Mind

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“Manifestation? Explain please because I don’t have a clear grasp on what it is”
“Manifestation is the embodiment of our mental abilities and soul….”
"Show me how...."
"You must reach your inner thoughts, and Grasp them, bring them to life..."
"This world...it's so...Strange..."
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Seven days pass
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[laying in a pool of water, rain was falling all around him, the water slowly became a dye of crimson red]

Voice: Who am i? How did i get here? Is that my blood?

[he stood up, staggered a few steps and fell once more]

*am i going to die? My name at least tell me that....before i go....*

[he pulled himself to his feet once more and staggered a little further until he fell against a stone wall]

Voice: What am i supposed to do? What do you want from me?!

[he felt his side where the crimson ooze rushed out]

*is this the end?*

[Thunder crashed around him and he eventually found himself flying through the air]

*I want to live....*
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Fire[AZURE-KITE]
Ice[]
Water[Shugo_Lover]
Earth[Gamerkale]
Wind[]
Lightning[KiteXX]
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Name: Jhonny Storm
Age: 17
Element: Fire
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Bio: He is a normal boy who go out with friends and stuff like that, he likes to play soccer and tennis, he likes to watch fights, but one day, he wake up and he discovered that he and his bed was covered by flames, and since that day he could control the fire.
EDIT: ((@KiteXX: I edited my info to make it more Understandable))
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Name: Sakura
Age: 17
Element: Water
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Bio: The only thing she remembers is having a feeling of drowning. Now all she knows is that water is at her will.
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one or two more
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Name: Rinzler
Age: 14
Element: Earth
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Bio: Rinzler spends his free time reading manga or writing stories. He's mostly a loner, but there is a girl at school with whom he shares his stories. He isn't actively aware of his abilities yet, attributing any unusual events caused by them to an overactive imagination.

He's an only child and his parents work long hours so he spends a lot of time reading and writing or helping the maid clean the house. He often feels that she's more mother to him than his actual mother.
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alright! lets start!

Though the air was below freezing that night, he felt nothing. He himself just lay in a reddening puddle. He could barely feel the cool rain as it traveled down his face. He couldn't even move. All he himself could do, was try to will the blood back into his body
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Take me back to the land,
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He found himself running down a hallway. Something was chasing him, he couldn't remember what, or why, but it was after him with a vengeance. He made turn after turn and he knew it was still there, just behind him, turning just in time to see which way he had gone. And then he ran into a dead end. His lungs were hurting, heck his whole body hurt. He took a moment to admire the architecture before the source of his doom ran around the corner after him. A beautiful young raven haired woman in a crimson dress. Who's only apparent flaws were the lack of shoes and the twisted smile on her lips. "You've been a thorn in my family's side for too long, Alex. But now you die!" She pulled out a knife and- "A knife? Really Rinzler? She's in a dress. Where did she get a knife?" Criticized Colleen.

"She obviously had it hidden under the dress, probably on her leg." "And taking a moment to admire the architecture? Really? He thinks he's about to die. Why in the world would he be doing that?" "He likes buildings!" "Uh huh. And the shoes?" "She came from a party and had to get rid of her heels to keep up." Justified Rinzler. Colleen sighed, "Alright, fine. So how does Alex get out of this one?" "He- I don't know. It needs work." Resigned Rinzler knowing he had lost this argument. "A little bit. He could just overpower her, but he's not exactly the fighting type." "I know. Maybe he set something up ahead of time?" "How? He's basically just been running for his life the whole story." "Alright, I'll come up with a new one." "Here, I'll put this with the rest of them." She said, taking the notebook from Rinzler. "Why don't you write one for next week?" "Are you kidding? You know I can't write to save my life." "You find holes enough in my work." "Yeah, but that's just because you don't think your stories through." "Fine, until tomorrow." "It's the weekend." "You know what I mean." Rinzler hurried onto the bus, the temperature was dropping and the heater on the bus was broken, he was glad of the coat he wore and also that Nanna forbade him from wearing the piercings outside the house. He pulled out a fresh notebook and began working on a new story.

Let's see, what should the protagonist's name be? I'll just call him Rinzler for now. Setting? Present day, why not. And what makes Rinzler special? There was a nasty bump and everyone with a window seat hit their heads, including Rinzler. Ouch, I wish I could get rid of that pothole. Oh that's a good idea. The ability to manipulate earth. Yeah, I can tell already. This is going to be my best story yet.
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Jhonny found himself in a building trying to flee from a guy who wanted to steal his bag, where he got some notebooks where he wrote everything about his powers, about whats going bad and things like that, when suddendly, he found himself in a room, with only a bed and a closet, he hid in the closet, waiting for the guy to leave ''i know your in there'' the guy said as Jhonny have the feeling that the guy left, then he gets out, the guy was behind Jhonny and it pointed to Jhonny's head with a gun ''well give me all that you got'' ''and what if i don't'' Jhonny said ''discover that by yourself'' the guy put his finger on the trigger as Jhonny open one hand revealing a fireball ''c'mon try to make me something'' Jhonny said as he put his hand on the guy's face ''well try to do anything and this flame will be the last thing you see and probably feel'' as Jhonny said this the guy left the room running out of the building ''well that's all'' Jhonny gets out of the building as he wrotes in his textbook well, a thief tried to steal my textbook, he pursued me to a building, the after a while i made a fireball with my hand, without letting the fire out of control he put his textbook on his bag and walked home
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The feeling of sinking into darken succumbed her. Yet the feeling of sanctuary even if falling. Gently drifting. Everything soft and soothing....

Her eyes flicked open and she found herself laying in her bed.
That dream again...
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His breath escaped in slow gasps, he could feel himself fading from the world...Only one thought coursed through his mind. I wish to live.
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
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bump...
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
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