Mech wars (what are you fighting for)

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Max: { he notices something off in the distance......abattle} what they hey seth! kero Im gonna go check something out you can handle this { the raizer jets off towards the kamikaze unit and he stops a few feet back from the weissaber} ............who-who are you { his guns change into their sword form} ANSWER!
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False Angel's eyes glowed orange, sending about half of the units towards the immediate enemy. The other half was sent to attack the Weissaber and Max without hesitation. Aude's thoughts had ceased, completely without any real understanding of what was going on anymore.
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Max: { he notices the kamikaze units} crap { Raizer avoids the attacks as he cuts through abunch and he starts fighting them off and avoiding attacks and he then sticks to melee combat with its 2 swords but a bunch make it past him} crap { he starts shooting the kamikaze units wildly as he blocks on coming atacks with its wings like thing that act as sheilds}

Kyle: { after he leaves earths atmosphere he sees the fight thats going on and he immediatly recognizes the attack pattern that the raizer is making and he then grips his controls tightly}


Leon: lets head on out! { the red streak jets off even faster then usual as the rest jet off except for the aegis}
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The Kamikaze units continued their assault, their reaction times faster after the others were halved. Aude's eyes opened only a little, the energy inside her kept on focusing only on the controls. False Angel continued moving towards the main ship, two guns now being lifted by its arms.
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Shadow Jumper pulls out two machine guns "Fine but who the the hell is Seth?" Bullets fly out of the guns, destroying one unit after another, Kero smirks inside the cockpit as his mech reloads "I'm ready, send out your best mechs and watch them explode." Shadow Jumper Starts flying through crowds of the kamikaze units, one by one they explode
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The units were unable to maintain their speed, and even higher speeds became impossible for them. False Angel was getting closer to the main ship. The canons were charging, ready to let out a high concentration of energy right at the engine.
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Raizer: { glowing red emiting particles}

Max: IM NOT GOING TO LET YOU GET CLOSE TO THAT SHIP! { he looks up as his eyes are glowing yellow} RAAAAHHHHHHH { the raizer rushes at high speeds as it encounters the false angel as it starts slashing at it causing it to fall back} ghhhhhhraaghhhhh { the raizer combines the swords into a large gun as it starts charging} RAAAHHH!!!

Raizer: { launches a large blast at oncoming kamikaze teams as it starts defending the ship as he encounters the zephyrus} GRAY! { he launches the blast}
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"You promise to let me take care of you?"

"Of course, you're the one who said I should live with you."

"Then we'll take it slow. You can't come home if you come with me."
The canons let out a blast of energy, the aim not off as it aimed right to the engines. The kamikaze units faltered, but made their way to attack the remaining enemies by blowing up in front of them. False Angel fell back slowly, Aude's body falling into sleep again, unable to hear the warnings. The center of the machine held a loud siren, accompanying the voice around her. The mechanism holding her refused to let go, an obvious malfunction.

"Warning, life systems in danger. Any further combat will cause a malfunction in the life sustaining systems. Oxygen rate falling rapidly."
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Kyle: { something within the aegis triggers as he rushes towards the mechanism as his eyes change the same way max's eyes changed} RAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!! { the aegis knocks the raizer back out of the way of a blast as he grabs the fallen angel} * I have to move quickly* { he takes the mechanism as it starts to crash towards earth and the aegis slows down at the rate speed for the 2 of them to land safely but abit further from the base then hoped} ......*breathing heavily* { his hands are trembling around the controls as his eyes slowly tun back to normal} wh-what the hell am I doing the commander is going to demote me to a lowly armed core pilot ill be stripped of my rank { the cockpit opens up as kyle stands outside of it as he looks at the false angel mechanism} hey are you allright

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Leon: Crap! KYLE!

Ray: Its fine you saw right he wasent running away he saw comrades in danger he disobeyed orders

maria: its fine hes never really been the type to leave a comrade in danger

Max: { he watches as the aegis retreated} kyle what { he focuses back on the battle as the wings separet into 12 pieces and they start charging up as it gathers energy and on screen appears a project name}

Project......Linebarrel initiated charging execution mode

Max: Im not sure what this means but Im going for it!

Raizer: { eyes light up as its big gun separates into a big sword lit by a green flame that looks like the glow of a core}

Max: EXECUTOR! { raizer swings its open as green flames stirke down gthe kamikaze units} RAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!! { something happens as his body lines appear on his face and after a series a furious attacks Raizer shuts down and its color returns to normal as its just floating there} *unconsious as the lines dissapear*

-----------------------on the bridge-------------------

Risa: its not possible that was project linebarrels weapon executor whered the hell did max find this mech the linebarrel project was shut down by the higher ups years ago

joesph:...............the executor I dont belive it

---------------enemy base-----------
soldier: COMMANDER HENRY WE Just got another update on the enemy they have 2 new mechs and its not that apparently the white and blue one has some sort of strange new weapon while the other one has alot more maneverability then a regular armed core

---------------in space--------------
Max: { unconsious as his cockpit is flashing red with warning across the screen} {he dreams of his days as a child with his family and of his old friends before the war}
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Aude's eyes opened only a little, unable to register anything. It was as if her very mind had lost track of reality. "Henry... Uncle Henry..." Her voice was barely above a whisper. Her eyes closed again without even acknowledging Kyle was there. The restraints holding her body let go finally. The skin tight suit had a few tubes that were releasing slowly.

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"Send the report right away." Henry spoke, entering another room behind his office. "What's the status of False Angel?"

"False Angel is currently on the planet Earth. Damage sustained endangered life sustaining conditions. Currently closest to the Aegis."

"Condition of Christelle?"

"Christelle is in normal condition. The entire body and mind has over exhausted, combat capabilities will require a considerable time of rest."

"Very well." Henry turned to exit the room, locking it before looking at the report sent to him.
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Kyle: { he jumps down as he rakes his helmet off and he walks over to christelle and he helps her up and realizes shes unconsious and bleeding} crap I dont know anything medical related ill give it a try { he takes some water nearby as he cleans her wounds and he looks through some toold to find a medical kit and he patches her up though not in the most profrssional way her pain should be less though and then kyle lies her down as he ignored his own wound from the crashand his own hed is bleeding abit} ohhhh wow I need to lie do-{ he falls over as he watches the starry sky} hehahahahaha I cant believe I ended up like this { he starts to doze even though its the worst thing to do when you hit your head hard}

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Raizer: { floating there as messages come in through the speaker though fuzzy}

MAx: ngh rghh { still unconsious}
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She looked around the hanger.
"Hey what happened to max!?"
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Aude's body rose up after half an hour, not aware of how much pain she should be in. The kit laying down near Kyle seemed to be the first item to grab. Without any wasted movement she assessed if the person next to her was alive. A feel to his neck and wrist confirmed he was alive. As if it were natural, she gently wrapped Kyle's head and had made sure to keep his head level. Her work done, it became hard to focus. What was she doing here again? Her body felt exhausted and her memory had yet to confirm what was going on or who this was. Perhaps a bit more rest.

And so she lay down again, falling to sleep once again.
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Shadow jumper picks up Raizer while shooting at other kami-kaze units "Out already? They haven't even finished attacking." Kero pilots back to the base, dropping Raizer off than flying towards Leon "Third time we fight, you can have help if you need it." Shadow Jumper shoots at Leon still flying closer at high speed
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Joesph: ohhh good your here can you help get max he was just fighting out there he gave all he had { he hurrys and performs some maintenance on the engine} alright were all good call kero back here NOW!

RIsa: KERO GET BACK HERE THATS AN ORDER OUR TOP PRIORITY IS TO GET AWAY

Raizer: the cockpit opens up revealing a unconsious Max

Max: ......................
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A medical team was now approaching Kyle and Aude from the main ship. One of the people checked over Aude a little to make sure she could be moved. Another picked up Kyle, making sure to arrange for the retrieval of the suits that were left out.
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Kero growls "...fine." Shadow Jumper dashes back "Orders are orders." Shadow Jumper flies into the base, Kero jumps out and laughs at Max even though Max was unconscious
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Kyle: { he wakes up sort of dazed} wh-where am I...........


Risa: ENGAGE ALL THRUSTERS FULL SPEED RETREAT! { the ships sucessdful retreats with out any problems or pursuers} phew allright damage report and get everyone to the medical ward

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Max: { unconsious in the medical unit}

doctor yukari: this isnt good his bodies wiped out really tired his blood pressure seems normal but his condition may worsen as his condition continues
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"Ah, you're awake." A doctor was standing above him, a clip board in his hand. "It was certainly good you were treated before we found you or we would have had to go into surgery." His face never once smiled at the facts in front of him. "We're heading back to the base, so please relax."

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"The others have retreated Commander." Henry Jones nodded, his eyes shut.

"We'll assess what damage we can repair and improve for the next battle."

"What about that experiment?"

"It went well. It will be awhile before we truly harness what she is truly capable of. However, she did astounding and that is worth a tremendous reward."
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Darn for a sec I thought I would get to ride The End again...
"I hope he'll be ok!"
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