a lost word
kills the world.
a sign of death
a loss of breathe.
can't see it coming
missed the train .
if only i wasn't late
i would've made the date.
i knew the signs had passed
my team amassed.
a face unbroken
then a smile had opened.
staring at the body
i saw the trace.
i followed the wire
to the vase
to bad. wrong place.
i stood over the case.
i had lost the trace.
outside a man was running
i knew the gears were turning.
this man had the face,
a new trace.
he had the weapon.
yet held no fear,
this man had won
my team was done.
the body wasn't fresh
the man had left.
i turned to the mirror
splattered on my chest
there was the blood.
on my face was the wound.
in my hand the tool of death.
who is the murderer?
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who is the murderer?
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
- shugo_lover
- The Oath Keeper

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Re: who is the murderer?
ahh thats what i thought but i cant really make a peom withought rhyming but i thought it wass pretty good.
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
- Helbaworshipper
- The Golden Fleece

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Re: who is the murderer?
Are you trying to portray an alternate personality?

“Everythings a choice. Nobody's born good. Nobody's born evil. It's always a choice.”― Tom Hiddleston
Re: who is the murderer?
its not that but i can see what you mean
Come with me in the twilight of a summers night for a while.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
Tell me of a story never ever told in the past.
Take me back to the land,
Where my yearnings were born.
The key to open the door is in your hand.
