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baysrd07 wrote:(( even with your permission, I'd never do something like that. Personally, I feel that no one can truely keep true to a character than the person whom created it. All I can do is provide ideas, drop me a line and I can help throw some ideas your way. ))
((You see the thing is... I really dont know how Miles would act with the given situation. She usually keeps her cool and will scream empty threats, but in the current state im not sure if she should lose her cool and lose control of her urges... it basically all rides on that decision...))

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((I c, well, I'll look back a few pages, read how she acts there, but for the sake of the story-line to continue, go ahead and attack him. Edit your post and I'll edit this one, so that we don't waste anymore space with useless OOC posts, k?))
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Miles stood pondering the path to choose. 'This man could be an ally, and Apple was in the same state as him...' she thought. 'But he is also a traitor... one of the deadliest of sins...' Miles dropped her arm to her waist and her sword to the ground; she dropped to her knees and began to sob. "What am I doing?... " she whispered. "Ive become this ... monster once again..." She looked up at the mess in front of her. "This is your fault! Youve made me this way! Youve only made these scars dig deeper into me, and you will pay... I will take Chaos down with you. His mistakes have costed us gravely. No sin goes unpunished!" She tightly gripped her once dropped sword and jumped into the air.

"You ask for death something you say us humans fear?? If we truly did would we be here right now trying to kill those that could very well do that? Think before you speak foul beast!" She found her words escaping mercilessly. "Draw your sword! I want to show you how much we humans, shaped in the eyes of the true God, fear death..." Miles slowly approached the monster and laid her hand in front of his face. "we... are truly the divine ones..."
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"Well well well... not going to take a freebie eh?" Cain said as he smiled. He drew his weapon and smiled coldly. "These blades, given to you by the traitor Minoshiya, do you even know the EXENT of their power?" Cain said with a smile. He drew the blade, as per Miles' request. However, instead of drawing the blade he'd been using since he'd taken over Chaos, he drew the "lost weapon" that Mino had passed to him.

"Weapons that transcend the limits of the system... tools that have more power than the ones whom wield them could ever hope to have alone. These blades can only be activated once. After that, they return to being 'just weapons'." Cain says as he looks down the blade to it's tip. "They are gifts from a corrupt god, a god that must be destroyed in order for peace to return to this world. The goddess "Aura" must be "Reborn". If I have to... I WILL destroy you. Chaos is no longer in control of this vessel. Therefore, I will have no problems in taking you out, since you continue wishing to be in my way." He says as he grabs her wrist, since her hand was still in his face, lifts her up and throws her across the area.

"What's wrong with being a 'monster'? As you can see," He says lifting his sword up over his shoulder, "I've made a living out of it. You may not like this fact, but perhaps the only way to beat me may be to become this 'monster' you fear of becoming." He says before quickly stepping in front of her, his monstrous face in hers. "Don't try to make me buy that "divine ones" garbage. You humans obviously forget that you only LOOK like the god you worship, you are NOT 'divine'. Your species constantly bickers over petty differences, such as race, nationality, gender, age, intelligence, etcetera. Your species is constantly trying to destroy itself using explosives, steel, toxins and more. And the biggest laugh of all is how those of you whom can't live with reality, either kill themselves, or retreat to a virtual reality, created by others whom either wanted to line their greedy back pockets with paper, cotton (US dollars are made of cotton), and shiny metals, or can't live with reality themselves." Cain says darkly before standing back up and jumping backward a few feet.

"Now then, BEFORE you come at me with this whole "think before you speak" ideology... remember to 'practice what you preach'. I knew EXACTLY what I was talking about, I know for a fact that half of you, if you COULD log-out, would be LONG gone. The other half of you are so afraid to leave because you have this sense of justice about you, and feel that you must save your friends or something like that." He says with anger before he gave her a smirk. "Once more thing... I'm not a 'foul beast', I'm just a collection of garbage data created from too much stress on the servers that created a thinking AI, which has taken your friend 'Chaos' as a host in order to speak with you all. The only difference between me and the one you call 'Hikaru', is that I do not know how to split myself from Chaos and form my own PC body based on him, like Hikaru did with Uraki. The difference between me and beings like Mada and Eve are that I was created AFTER Eve was, herself, infected by an AIDA. I was spawned from that merger." He finishes, closing his eyes for a moment.

"However, talking will, apparently, settle nothing. I can't force you to accept my way of thinking. That leaves us with just this last option... Are you ready?" He says as he lifts his blade off his shoulders and grabs it with both his hands, smiling.
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((OOC: I'm really sorry that I have not posted in a very long while. Unfortunately, it doesn't seem like things are going to get any better soon. However, I do want to say that this roleplay will not die, because in fact, it can't. I will return soon so keep posting. I will keep you updated on more information when I can. Meanwhile, make sure that the last fights are done with so we can move forward with the ending. To everyone too, please keep a look out for more comments I might post. I don't want anyone straying away from the roleplay in any way at all, cause in the most unlikely time, I will return. Like I said, I will be using public computers to reach the roleplay, and I do expect for it to be moving if anything towards the end. I understand how frustrading this might be, but you can imagine what I'm going through. So please, understand and I will see you soon. Perhaps sooner. ))

Glace stood at a distance from Cain, hearing what he had to say to all of them patiently. He could feel a little bit of anger rising from under him. It seemed that every AIDA that spawned from no where had an advanced intelligence. Then again, AIDA was connected to itself whether it was scattered or gathered.

Suddenly, above Cain a familair sound echoed, something like laughter or a giggle. It was Eve, no doubt. She was still looking at the battle go on below her and apparently was enjoying her self aswell. Cain heard her before charging for an attack.

"Just a little...more." Eve whispered to herself.

"Chaos!" Glace cried out, hoping that the real Chaos could hear him. "Enough! Don't let yourself be played with!"
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(he... and here I was coming to just bump this thread since it was at the bottom of the first page. I click to see the thread and find that you edited your post already and that my post will be needed lol.)

.:}Within Chaos' mind{:.
"Glace..." Chaos said weakly as he lifted his head up a little. Cain, whom had been ignoring him for a while now, turned to face him.
"There's nothing you can do little Chaos. Just relax and let me finish my task..." Cain said with a smirk as he turned back away from him...

.:}Meanwhile, back at Chaos' apartment{:.
Chaos' real self was out cold, laying there with his head on the keyboard. Somehow his cat that he'd locked up had found it's way out of it's cage and was drinking some water. Upon returning to the room, the cat jumped on a nearby stereo, accidentally turning it on. She quickly ran back to her cage and closed the door after her, afraid the sudden noise would wake her master up.

.:}Within Chaos' mind{:.
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"That...song..." He said weakly as he heard the lyrics begin. "Urgh... damn cat got out again... heh..." Chaos said as he struggled to get up.
"What are you doing? Haven't you realized that you are powerless against me?" Cain said as he shot a concentrated amount of dark magic at Chaos, whom caught it in his hand, showing no pain or fear. "IMPOSSIBLE!!!" Cain said as Chaos smiled, closing his fist on the blast, making a black cloud of smoke erupt from his fist.
"I don't think... I'll be accepting your deal. I'm tired of sitting back and watching you try to kill my friend." Chaos said calmly as he drew the sword that Mino had given him, while the blade that Cain was holding disappeared. "You are wrong Cain. If given the choice to leave, I don't believe anyone of us would have done so. You seem to forget one thing. Where there is fear in the human heart, courage forms, to enable the human race to continue fighting that fear. Eve, I know you can hear me though Cain here. Take these words and run them through your AIDA controlled heart." Chaos says as he lifts his blade, smiling. He then rams it though Cain's avatar within his mind. "Humans aren't a race to be taken lightly. You cut us, we bleed. You hit us, we bruise. You bare your fangs, and fear grows within us. However, believe it or not, that is what makes us stronger than you. We fear pain, so we fight to keep from hurting. We fear rejection, so we work to please others. We fear death... so we fight to help others avoid it. That is the spirit of self-sacrifice. Something every Human is capable of, and something you will NEVER understand." Chaos says as he lifts the blade up, with Cain still held on it. "Now Cain... feel my rage... the rage of the ones whom you and your brethren have hurt, bruised, and rejected... TIGER STRIKE!!!" Chaos says as he slams Cain down to the ground of the area and continued to slice three more times, before the attack finished.

.:}Battlefield{:.

Cain was screaming in severe pain as the AIDA within his body began to contract and shrink in size. Chaos' name returned to the pc body, now that Chaos was dominate again. "DO IT! DRAIN ME NOW!!! I don't.. know how long.. I'll... be able to keep him... down. I'm using all my willpower now just to keep him down. Please... end it!!!" Chaos shouted in pain as he clutched his stomach.
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Miles realized the opening she had been given and took the chance. She opened with a slower more powerful skill. "Tandurshan Blow!!" The Opal Blade that had been given to her earlier charged straight towards Chaos and stabbed him in the gut, slowly draining HP and taking it into her own body. As soon as the weapon had sucked out the max damage it could deal Miles pulled back the blade and struck for a second charged blow. The attack hit directly and threw his body back as if it were a plastic bag. She then jumped back to heal the recoil from the attack. She used three healing potions and was good to go once again.

Miles now lowered her head. "I dislike the way youve done this Chaos... giving me the easy way out... Your death will be a well timed one." She charged sheathing her blade at her waist drawing it as she appeared beside him, slitting his neck. She stabbed backwards and hit his spine, followed by the blade being torn upwards through his back. 'Rengeki' read above his character and Miles took her chance "Orge Sword!" She used what little SP she had left to launch possibly her last attack on this monster.

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"Heh... sorry Miles... I can tell you like a good fight. I was watching. Thanks for not giving in to his words. I'm not going to lie to you... I was weak. This mistake will probably haunt me for the rest of my life. Now..." Chaos said with a smile as he drew his blade as well. "If you would have rather have an opponent whom fights back, you could have just said so. The hits you've laid on me have hurt me yes, but I think they hurt him more due to that sword you are using and the fact that this is still his PC infected form. I can fight you now if you'd like..." Chaos said as he stood up, his body still mutated by the AIDA, however only his chest area had the aura of AIDA surrounding it. He held his blade up over his shoulder as he held his claw arm out towards her. He held the hand out and began opening and closing his fingers, the way one would usually do so to say "Bring it on" or something like that.
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Meanwhile...
CC-Corp Building/Control Room/

Several minutes had passed since the players had entered Eve's server world. Viola sat in front of the monitors typing furiously, seeking for a way into the area. Zeami stood watching patiently from behind her. The unconsious man once laying in the floor had been moved into one of the room's corner where his body leaned against the wall. At that same time, Zeami wondered if the players were already fighting Eve herself. Although he didn't want to realize it, he knew that deep down inside him, a guilt grew stronger and stronger; silently creeping up towards his consiousness. Perhaps sending them into battle with an A.I that had control over an even stronger entity wasn't a very well thought out plan. Yet it wasn't like there was any other options available either.

A few of those players had been given special powers capable of destroying AIDA, or atleast scaring it away if anything. The rest of the players had obtained weapons with similar powers given to them by the player Minoshiya. Wether the weapons were safe to use against AIDA, especially since it came from someone affected by it at a very critical level was something only time could answer. Of course, it now seemed as if the weapons had some use against AIDA afterall, upon observing them during usage.

[BGM: Forest of Pain(.Hack//G.U//Vol.3)]

After a while longer, Viola finally spoke. "Zeami, I've located an opening." She said, resting a little bit and smiling. Zeami walked closer from behind and put his arm on her shoulder. "Good job, Viola. Secretly install the survaillance system." He said, with a much more relaxed tone than before. "Yes, sir."

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[The World]//Eve's Lair

Above the players, into the stormy black skies Eve floated with her red sprites surrounding her. She gazed at the battle below and knew it was soon to be over. Her long white hair moved slowly behind her, and her brown skin shined like honey in the edges of her exposed body parts.

"Hm?..." Eve slowly turned behind her, then glance above before returning to look at the fight below again. She has sensed something suddenly. She knew the intrusion was not of AIDA. It was something else. Shortly afterwards, AIDA bubbles formed in front of her, moving violently. "You sensed it too, didn't you?" She asked it. "Don't worry. Nothing will be able to stop us from achieving our goals. We just need a little more time." The AIDA bubbles slowly shrank in size until, finally, dissapearing. Eve placed a finger in the middle of her lowerlip and smiled. "Go ahead. Do what you want. You still can't stop us. Soon...you wil be gone."

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White Space--Unknown Server/Area

Somewhere in The World, a small white room resided. It was in this unknown place where the girl trapped inside the purple orb had been hidden away all this time. She was on her knees, looking at the ground; fully knowing that she was not strong enough to destroy the orb around her, which in fact, was actually a strong form of AIDA specifically created to keep her trapped inside until Eve was done with her goals.

However the girl was tired, and she knew she didn't much time. She had used most of her powers to grant the chosen players their ability to use 'Twilight Mode', aswell as give Minoshiya the power to create more weapons with similar powers for the rest of the players too.

The girl got up slowly, her long blue-silver hair falling downwards to her behind. She placed her hands on her chest and closed her eyes, taking a deep breathe. She then opened her eyes and her body began to shine a pale white. "I will not allow you to go on...Eve. I must not give up." She whispered, glowing brighter. "Minoshiya....come to me." She ordered.

Where-ever Adam was, Minoshiya's consious was there aswell. The orb containing it began to glow strongly and released several pulses. Adam immediatly noticed this and took out the orb, and looked at it. Suddenlly, the orb shot out away from him and vanished into the air in darkness. Adam sighed and lowered his arm, closing his eyes and smiling. "You've been summoned, Minohiya. Hehehe. No worries..."

The orb suddenlly appeared inside the white room. The girl watched and smiled. She was glad to see Minoshiya's consiousness still alive in this world. She then extended on her arms towards the direction in which the orb floated. Her body began to release similar pulses, the orb reacted by pulsing back. "I will restore you."

The orb began to shine with a bright light that engulfed the entire room. The AIDA reacted by moving slowly upwards, away from the intense light. After it vanished, a familair figure stood. It was Minoshiya. He now wore a white suit with a long white blade ingraved with golden german words. He looked up towards the orb and realized the girl inside. Immediatly, the memory of his first encounter with the girl appeared in his mind. He remembered approaching her and touching the orb only to be blasted away with a powerful force.

"Mino...shiya." She said. "I have given you the power...to destroy the circle. Please destroy it now. We don't have much time."

Although he didn't know what was going on exactly, but he felt the urge to follow the girl's order. He raised the sword up to his chest and closed his eyes. Everything was occuring too fast and the AIDA had identified him as a threat. It began to react by moving very violently. The girl sat into a curled position and closed her eyes. "Don't give up..." She said one last time.

The battle was beginning. Not much time was left. Minoshiya got ready for it, and the AIDA released two tentacle shaped 'hands' that charged towards him.

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"It's good to see Chaos back in control again, but he's still infected. I can't tell though, how is the fight between Rein and Applegate going along?" Shadow asks calmly as he tries to look over to where the girls were fighting.

(seriously, is that fight done or not?)
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I was supposed to be Dead...

His eyes were empty at first as he stared up at the orb and AIDA coming at him, almost as if he didn't care. Having then been grabbed along the shoulder and leg he was raised into the sky. " I..was..supposed to be.. " He whispered, his mind still not registering all of this.

The AIDA had then stopped once it raised him into the air and then turned downwards slamming him into the ground and causing a crater to be formed, the hands retreating from the smoke caused as it waited for a sign of life. Awaiting for the smoke to be cleared they saw his white body and small pieces of rock having been on his clothes from the collision, but everything else he seemed fine and without injury.

As I died, I rejoiced. I would see my family again...

The AIDA had then turned their arms into sharp points, having matched that of blades as it moved closer and above his body. His breathing having been calm and casual as he stared up at the sky, his eyes blurring to the vision from the blast. He closed his eyes slowly at the thoughts and memories passing by.

..But then I woke up back on the battlefield.Back in 'The World'. Back in Hell...

He opened his eyes once more and looked at the blades formed from the AIDA arms, having watched them closely as they moved back and then started to come down at a fast speed. His memory having then all of the sudden shot back to a bridge and Cathedral where he talked with Uraki and Nephilim. His eyes widened as his grip on the hilt of his sword tightened, the sharp points stabbing and causing more smoke to be made as the black liquid groaned assuming the threat was gone, having then swung it's arms around once more to clear the smoke as there was nothing left. The body having not been there anymore as it groaned and raised it's blades and looked around.

[ BGM: ' Everything in These Hands ' (.Hack//G.U.//Vol 1)]

" Too Low Class... " His voice had said as it turned it's arms towards the edge of the Crater having seen him stand there, his eyes staring down as he watched with a almost emotionless face and no emotion in his eyes, the red hues raising to the orb where the AIDA seemed to have come from. " Break it.... " He whispered in reminding himself of what he heard from the girl. The AIDA twitched and dashed forward from having heard that comment, his eyes looking back down at them as he jumped dodging one of the jabs to his body, his sword having been swung with his arm as he destroyed the other tentacle coming at him.

He landed on the black liquid and then ran up it's arm with the end of his sword cutting the arm in half as he traveled along it's long limb. As he watched ahead more small arms had shot out and he slid to a stop, having placed his weapon in front of him as he watched from the small area of vision he had at the reach for him. " My Choice of Defense...a good one. " He whispered, his eyes glowing as another pair of black arms shot out from behind him, having collided with the other ones and ripping them apart from the main limb as he watched, his eyes glowing as he continued to run and then jumped into the air as the AIDA arms shielded the orbs and formed a wall. " Your choice of defense....quite the mistake. " He whispered to it as his eyes glowed and he slammed into the wall, moving right through it as if it was water and then being in front of the orb with his sword in hand as he raised it above his head and swung down colliding the tip and surface of the orb once more.

He had only touched the surface and then the barrier activated in an attempt to push him away once more. Sparks having then shot back at him as he continued to press down with both his hands, his wrists having then suddenly cracked as his PC data was damaged already from the force he was pushing down on the barrier. His eyes glowed once more as the same black arms had appeared from behind him, an AIDA that had not been connected to him but remained in his shadow, and placed itself on the blade itself in an attempt to help his force on pushing the blade down.

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[The World]//Eve's Lair

Adam had been sitting against one of the podium's watching the battle between them all. His own AIDA having then cringed as he smirked. " Good boy...he's serving a better purpose than I imagined. " He whispered and looked back down at their battles, having been annoyed by one fact. AIDA had been helping Minoshiya without infecting him, such a possible thing...a black AIDA that was similar to Hikaru? Yet it had no real body or will, it was simple and had no intellect. It wasn't as advanced as Hikaru but had the same traits. " AIDA... " He whispered, his eyes looking to the small orbs around him and then down to the infected players. For whatever reason AIDA had to actually help Minoshiya was an oddity, it remained an enemy to the others while it helped him. With the Twilight Book in hand he flipped the pages and read a bit, having been bored of this all. Eve shouldn't have been playing with them at all. At this rate she was going to get defeated...which is where he'll consume everything in her fall. Including his little counterpart which he gave to Aura, with his body and AIDA's powers...he'll have everything. A body that surpassed normal system parameters while having a virus that can change systems and people. The Perfect Key.
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As Minoshiya continued to press down on the barrier with all his might, the AIDA began to crack. The cracks were small, but they seemed to be growing longer, and longer. The girl moved her head upwards and looked at MInoshiya face-to-face, as if telling him to go on, not to give up. Although he couldn't hear those words being said by the girl, he could definetly hear them ring endlessly inside his mind. As if that wasn't strange enough, he was suddenlly overwhelmed with the powerful sensation of rescueing the girl. He forced much more on the blade, even his own character data began to crack under the pressure. Yet his eyes, all they did was stare at the girl. Blank eyes.

However, the AIDA managed to grab onto Minoshiya with several of its new tentacle hands. At first, Minoshiya would not release himself from the attack, but as he began to grow exhuasted, the hands began to grow stronger. Suddenlly, Minoshiya was blasted several feet away from the AIDA at an incredible speed. And he flew towards the ground, watching as he failed to save her, his vision became blurry again-then...

"Aaaack!", Minoshiya hit the ground hard; pieces of his data scattering around near him.

The girl watched in horror and moved her head down again, her hair blocking her face now. The AIDA's hands retreated inside of the barrier again and it began to move slowly towards the hurt Minoshiya. His heart began to pound heavily on his chest, his breath began to slow down, and yet the words of the girl trapped inside still yelled louder than the beats of his heart.

He once again stood up and grabbed his sword as best he could, trying not to fall again.

The AIDA stopped a few feet away suddenly. Smaller AIDA began to appeare around it and circle it. Then, those cracks that had been created at it's top began to heal themselves, growing smaller and smaller. He was stuned, tired, and hurt. Yet this battle was far from over. The AIDA released a loud moan then, and even more hands were formed; all targeting Minoshiya.

"...Don't...give...up." The girl managed to say.

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((no, the fight between Chaos and Miles is still going on, I'm waiting for Twili to post. Also, the fight between Rein and Applegate is still unfinished with Rein still needing to post in that fight.))
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((Ahh, the topic notification thingy hasn't been sending me emails! D: I'm so sorry! ._.))

"Y-your wrong..!" Rin exclaimed quietly, "Ren... She isn't really a bad person..! If.. if she were to go... It wouldn't be saving me at all!"
The Lei clumsily avoided Applegate's blows, striking him with her staff.
"She... she's helped me so much... Against bullies at school... She's just..." She trailed off, leaving her sentence hanging, unsure how to finish the sentence. Ren took over.
Ren drew her Twin Blades and hastily hacked at her, hitting her three times. Rin then cast another "Vak Dom", sending fireballs showering down on her friend.
"Please, Apple-san...!"

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He gritted his teeth and got back onto his feet, having stared up and smirked weakly. " Easy for you to say...you're just sitting back and watching. " He joked, having watching the AIDA closely and trying to think of a plan on how to get it away from the barrier. It would have been easier with another person, having sighed he heard the moan of his own AIDA as it circled him. " Somehow I liked it better when they were on my side...Oh well, can't complain now. " He said and shrugged as he spun his arm circular in stretching it.

He'd just have to continue cutting through and chop at the barrier for now. The cracks wouldn't heal that fast and if he continued to slam his sword at that one place over and over, it'd eventually break. " Besides...if I can't save you from AIDA and break a stupid ball...then how can I face the others again? Especially Nephilim and Uraki. " He whispered, his eyes glowing crimson as the AIDA around him reacted to the emotions he was giving off.

He jumped into the air and the AIDA had gone under him, giving him almost a surfboard to move in air as he circled the AIDA around the orb. " Let's try this again! " He shouted out and jumped off the surface and down towards the orb once more, having cut through the arms as it came to him with a few powerful swings as this time it send out slashes outwards from the tip and cut further down hitting the orb once more. " Only this time a stab! " He shouted as he spun the sword around his hand and then placed his other hand on it as he aimed down and fell from the sky stabbed the orb once more in the same spot. " Damn it.. " He whispered, feeling the crack from his hands travel past his wrists and travel down to his arms.
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I glared at the runt that just attacked me. "You are trash! No better than a bully! What the hell do you think you will accomplish by killing me?" I screamed angrily at the cat. "If you kill me the scars that you have left in Rin will remain! You cant change the past, and its inevitable that history will repeat itself again and again. So why fight it? Your going to hurt her again and again as long as you live! Your worst that the criminals that kill... your killing your own blood and making her suffer as shes still alive, but everyday shes crawling in her own flesh worrying about what tommorow will bring and that maybe... just maybe... you will except her and stop picking on her!" Suddenly my voice lowered and so did my sword arm. "You will never get it... You are her corruption... The thing that breaks her." A tear began to form underneath my eye. "You havent lived a life like that have you Ren? Everyday... thinking... Am I worth living? Should I stop taking up everyone's air? Maybe God made a mistake when I was born... maybe I dont matter? We are all children of God, but you dont seem to believe that, judging from your actions." My eyes jumped from the ground to Ren's face and I leaped forward swiping at her feet. Then I sheathed my blade drawing the blade that had been given to me by Minoshiya. Slowly my knees gave in and I fell right infront of Ren with my hands held high point the blade downwards are her throat. "The AIDA inside of me tell me this blade can take the lives of those in the real world." My fangs seemed more pronounced that usual; Ren could see my ever ellusive eyes, she gazed into them. "Rin... I will set you free."

((Luna, its up to you. Ren dies here and Rin will seek revenge on Apple later on or Ren parrys the blow (but make sure that its like believable cause the level difference in our characters is kinda... large) ))


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Miles smiled as the wind began to blow. Her hair rustling across her face. "Chaos... one of us will end here. Im glad you chose to fight me rather than lay down your blade." She charged clashing blades with her foe. "Give me a battle I wont forget."
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"No problem. I'll to my best to give you a fight. Just don't think of me too badly if I lose, ok?" He says with a sarcastic smile as he grabs her weaponless arm with his claw arm while keeping pressure on her blade with his normal arm. Clenching down on the arm with the claws, he pierces her forearm, causing a decent wound before lifting his legs off the ground and flipping them into her stomach, jumping off of it afterwards, but not without slicing into her arm with his blade. Chaos stood up straight as he returned to a defensive position and awaited her next attack.
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Miles cried in agony as Chaos grabbed hold of her arm. She pulled away, unsuccessful on the first two attempts but got away on the third. She backed up three steps from the monster. "Acid Wall!" she cried as Chaos suddenly became slowed. The acid stuck to him and forced him to drag himself forward. "Foreign Matrix!" she screamed a second time. Miles grabbed her sword tightly in both hands and stuck Chaos at the knees throwing him in the air with her blade; as gravity began to referse she flung herself in the air and delivered two powerful blows to his spine. The slow effect just dissappeared as he hit the ground. "If this werent a battle... we could possibly... be friends..." she said between heavy breaths as Chaos rose to his feet. "Its... too bad... huh..."
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WhiteRoom//???

The force Minoshiya used in every attack was evident because of the "cracks" in his own character's data. The girl could see this over the transparent orb and at the same time, also feel the pain Minoshiya felt.

The AIDA let out another loud moan. More of the smaller bubbly AIDA began to appeare around it like the last time. Only this time they were popping out around Minoshiya. The AIDA then shot itself at him, putting pressure on him so he could either pull away or decrease his force on the blade. But it was to no use. Minoshiya would not give up. Then, again, the cracks began to form in the area that was stabbed by his sword; increasing in size and length, slowing stretching around the orb.

The AIDA moaned again and the AIDA that stuck to Minoshiya pulled away. More of the AIDA's "arms" appeared and charged at him; trying to get him away from it. Yet it was to no avail either. This time, he would make sure to break the barrier AIDA.

Suddenly, the sound of breaking class echoed everywhere around the area. The words, 'PROJECT BREAK!" appeared above the barrier. Minoshiya saw the words and quickly released one of his arms from the sword's grip, aiming it down at the AIDA. He knew what he had to do next.

His character began to shine with a bright light, and energy and polygons gathered around his hand and wrist. Ones and Zeros also appeared and began to spiral around his hand, along with the energy and polygons. In front of his hand, a symbol that resembled an eye with a pupil also appeared; it was a golden symbol.

"Data--Drain!", Minoshiya shouted.

The energy released it self from his hand and shot out downwards, into the AIDA. The AIDA screamed, while it's arms let go of MInoshiya and scattered everywhere around, all in deep agony.

The cracks in the barrier reached all over the AIDA. The girl moved and looked around her, seeing her 'prison' slowly falling apart. She smiled, thinking she was only seconds from breaking lose. However, she began to feel another 'dark' aura. She glanced at Minoshiya then, and MInoshiya looked at her.

"There...it's over." He said, not knowing what was about to occure.

Just when it seemed like the barrier AIDA was finished, several of the smaller AIDA appeared everywhere. This time their size was increasing rapidly. "Now what?"

They began to grow bigger, and bigger. Soon they had eclipsed the entire white room. The AIDA then showered over the barrier and Minoshiya was pushed away with great force, falling only a few feet away from the barrier AIDA. When he stood up he saw a new barrier AIDA over the girl, this one had no cracks in it. In fact, it looked the same as it was before he began to fight. The only obvious difference was that this one was black, not purple.

The girl inside remained quiet, feeling dissapointed, but not at Minoshiya, at her self. None of this would have occured if it wasn't for her, she thought. A tear feel down from her the edges of her eye and down on her cheek.
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"Who said... we HAD... to let that stop us? I'm still infected and I don't know for how long I can keep my own wits about me before it takes hold again. I'll keep fighting till then. If however it makes it easier on you to think of me as an enemy, then by all means, go ahead. So then, let's continue..." Chaos said as he smiled, using a fast speed movement to get right in her face and activates a blast of spell, hitting her in the forehead (like Haseo did to Negimaru in the opening cut-scene for volume 1). The force of the blast sends her flying back a few feet as he jumps up into the air, holding his blade downwards towards her, ready to slice (you got a choice, parry the blow, dodge the blow, or take the blow. their levels are about the same I guesstimate)
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