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Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 10:20 pm**

This is an obscene poem I wrote during 10th grade for my Creative Writing class. I hope you like it!

Sex with Ice Cream

Crawling over to me, kissing me softly on the cheek
Teasing, she asks me what I want. I whisper back,
"It's in the freezer."

I lick the spoon dry and feel the ice cream inside me
Making the hair on my back stand up straight as the cold drops
Trickle down my throat.

Thinking of Strawberry makes my muscles go slack
Her soft texture, that sweet scent dripping off of her
She’s gentle and adoring.

Once, I tried having two flavors at the same time
Innocent Vanilla with spoiled, decadent Chocolate
It was thrilling, but I felt filthy afterwards.

Sundae excites my passions
I shiver as I dream of what she’ll let me do to her tonight
That warm embrace mystifies me.

Mint! Oh, Mint.
She knows my weaknesses; I surrender
Helpless to fight the energy building inside me like a storm
Cold, insatiable hunger overcomes.

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 10:31 pm**

Ahahaha, this is awesome!
I love how you've conveyed the flavours of ice cream and such!
It's definately entertaining XDD
Good work! 10/10!!

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 10:32 pm**

my friends are so crazy XD Its soooo gooood! lmao

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 11:16 pm**

Wow..I wonder what inspired this
artwork. Would you care to explain?

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 11:29 pm**

Dot-Hack-Rocks wrote:Wow..I wonder what inspired this
artwork. Would you care to explain?

Hmmm, interesting question. It's partly supposed to be a joke of course, but I dunno. I was lonely?

Honestly though, I just wanted to test my ability to write erotic poetry, and at the same time see what my teacher would let me get away with, and much to my satisfaction she entered it into the school art magazine.

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 11:41 pm**

I see...well. I must say no
one I would've known right now
would ever do this. Congrats my
friend.

Posted: **Sun Aug 06, 2006 12:44 pm**

wow...o.o just wow...and that made it into a school mag? haha it was very interesting to read...ICECREAM! ...i would have to say chocolate chip mint is the best ...XD

Posted: **Mon Aug 07, 2006 8:37 am**

lmao I was trying the same thing with coffee XD! CHOCOLATE MINT IS THE MOST SEXY!

Posted: **Wed Aug 09, 2006 12:52 am**

this is wonderfully writeen, i cant believe i missed this before. The subject itself is original and inventive.

But i prefer the flavor Blue Moon. But no one makes it anymore. =[

Posted: **Wed Aug 09, 2006 1:09 am**

Well, thank you! I'm glad everyone likes it, I do too.

Aera, if you haven't already, you should pick "Other," making that one of the top three choices so far!

Posted: **Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:17 am**

That poem is awesom! I love it! I don't write erotic poetry, but I do wwrite erotic novels. I can't post them here ofcourse...but...w/e. I post them in my blogs on Myspace.

Posted: **Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:38 pm**

Vanilla, all the way...!!!

Posted: **Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:39 pm**

Wow you guys brougth back a topic from last year ago.. =.=;

spam XD

Posted: **Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:09 pm**

Marioshinobi wrote:Wow you guys brougth back a topic from last year ago.. =.=;

spam XD

For REAL...???...!!! 1 Year...???...!!! Woah...

Posted: **Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:50 pm**

FlickerHaseo wrote:Vanilla, all the way...!!!

Yeah gotta stay traditional and such

Posted: **Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:24 pm**

BadRPiggy wrote:
FlickerHaseo wrote:Vanilla, all the way...!!!
Yeah gotta stay traditional and such

Off-Topic:NICE SIGGY + AVATAR + LOCATION! ROFL, INVADER ZIM FTW! On-Topic: Yep, vanilla FTW. I used to simply LOVE chocolate, but now, chocolate = downhill

vanilla =