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Sexiest ice cream flavor?

Butter Pecan
0
No votes
Cherry
0
No votes
Chocolate
4
14%
Mint
3
10%
Raspberry
0
No votes
Strawberry
6
21%
Sundae
0
No votes
Vanilla
8
28%
Other
8
28%
 
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marthwmaster
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This is an obscene poem I wrote during 10th grade for my Creative Writing class. I hope you like it!

Sex with Ice Cream

Crawling over to me, kissing me softly on the cheek
Teasing, she asks me what I want. I whisper back,
"It's in the freezer."

I lick the spoon dry and feel the ice cream inside me
Making the hair on my back stand up straight as the cold drops
Trickle down my throat.

Thinking of Strawberry makes my muscles go slack
Her soft texture, that sweet scent dripping off of her
She’s gentle and adoring.

Once, I tried having two flavors at the same time
Innocent Vanilla with spoiled, decadent Chocolate
It was thrilling, but I felt filthy afterwards.

Sundae excites my passions
I shiver as I dream of what she’ll let me do to her tonight
That warm embrace mystifies me.

Mint! Oh, Mint.
She knows my weaknesses; I surrender
Helpless to fight the energy building inside me like a storm
Cold, insatiable hunger overcomes.
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Post by Kite_2000 »

Ahahaha, this is awesome!
I love how you've conveyed the flavours of ice cream and such!
It's definately entertaining XDD
Good work! 10/10!!
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Post by Wan »

my friends are so crazy XD Its soooo gooood! lmao
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Post by Dot-Hack-Rocks »

Wow..I wonder what inspired this
artwork. Would you care to explain? :?:
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Dot-Hack-Rocks wrote:Wow..I wonder what inspired this
artwork. Would you care to explain? :?:
Hmmm, interesting question. It's partly supposed to be a joke of course, but I dunno. I was lonely? :P Honestly though, I just wanted to test my ability to write erotic poetry, and at the same time see what my teacher would let me get away with, and much to my satisfaction she entered it into the school art magazine.
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Post by Dot-Hack-Rocks »

I see...well. I must say no
one I would've known right now
would ever do this. Congrats my
friend. :D
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Post by d07_h4ck_3xp3r7_01 »

wow...o.o just wow...and that made it into a school mag? haha it was very interesting to read...ICECREAM! ...i would have to say chocolate chip mint is the best ...XD
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Post by Saskie »

lmao I was trying the same thing with coffee XD! CHOCOLATE MINT IS THE MOST SEXY!
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Post by Aera »

this is wonderfully writeen, i cant believe i missed this before. The subject itself is original and inventive.

But i prefer the flavor Blue Moon. But no one makes it anymore. =[
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Post by marthwmaster »

Well, thank you! I'm glad everyone likes it, I do too.

Aera, if you haven't already, you should pick "Other," making that one of the top three choices so far! :)
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Post by Bonzai »

That poem is awesom! I love it! I don't write erotic poetry, but I do wwrite erotic novels. I can't post them here ofcourse...but...w/e. I post them in my blogs on Myspace.
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Post by FlickerHaseo »

Vanilla, all the way...!!! 8)
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Post by Marioshinobi »

Wow you guys brougth back a topic from last year ago.. =.=;

spam XD
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Marioshinobi wrote:Wow you guys brougth back a topic from last year ago.. =.=;

spam XD
For REAL...???...!!! 1 Year...???...!!! Woah... :shock: :? :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :o
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Post by BadRPiggy »

FlickerHaseo wrote:Vanilla, all the way...!!! 8)
Yeah gotta stay traditional and such
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Post by FlickerHaseo »

BadRPiggy wrote:
FlickerHaseo wrote:Vanilla, all the way...!!! 8)
Yeah gotta stay traditional and such
Off-Topic:NICE SIGGY + AVATAR + LOCATION! ROFL, INVADER ZIM FTW! On-Topic: Yep, vanilla FTW. I used to simply LOVE chocolate, but now, chocolate = downhill :shock: :( :x :evil: :twisted: :axe: :axe: :vom: :finga: vanilla = :D :) :o :lol: 8) :oops: :P :roll: :wink: :tonqe: :rock: :yawinkle: :goodman: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :partyman: :bear:
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