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There was a normal day in Iwatodai, a city built and funded by the Kirijo Corporation, It's the 2009; Experiments carried out ten years ago created the Dark Hour, a period of time that exists between one day and the next. A group of High-School students that know about the Dark Hour fight with things in the same time, these things are called Shadows, they leave their victims in near-catatonic states outside of the Dark Hour. The Gekkounkan Highschool, in the Dark Hour transforms into a tower called Tartarus, where the Shadows roam everywhere; To investigate and learn about the Dark Hour, Shadows, and Tartarus, the "Specialized Extracurricular Execution Squad", or SEES, was created. SEES is a group of high-schoolers capable of summoning beings known as Personas to combat Shadows. A Persona is "a second soul that dwells deep within a person's heart. It is an entirely different personality that emerges when a person is confronted with something from outside his world."; some days ago, a kid called Minato Arisato moved to Iwatodai, to a Dorm, where two girls called Yukari Takeba and Mitsuru Kirijo received him, and showed him his room the next day he was introduced with Junpei Iori in Gekkoukan Highchool, then, he was introduced with Shuji Ikutsuki, and the same night, at the Dark Hour it seemed like they were watching him, and, two nights later, he awakened his 'Persona' meeting Akihiko, and then, joined 'SEES', and discovered that Yukari, Mitsuru and Akihiko could summon Personas too, then they discovered that Junpei awaked to his 'Persona' too, then, in class Mitsuru was somewhat excited about something that same night, and told them to meet at the Dorms in the night....



Ok so, this is what happened in Persona 3 FES, i made the whole a new world title to make it interesting, and, all the story came from my mind...


Templates: You can be an original Character, or a character already existing in P3, and PM me if u wanna be a P4 char, and we'll see how it works, PM me if you wanna appear somewhere in the dorms and introduce and stuff if you're an OC


Template:

Name: Complete name if you can
Age:
Year: Junior, Senior, ETC
Persona: The name and the APP
Weapon: please be realistic, we're humans, and, no guns please, everything but guns, except a gun like the one of SEES(A little one)
APP: a Description, but it will be easier for me to read the temp with images, but descriptions are ok
Bio: A short Bio


Mine:

Name: Minato Arisato
Age: 17
Year: Junior
Persona: Orpheus (Fool Atcana)
(In APP)
Weapon: Can use katanas, rapiers, boxing gloves, bows(One at a time)
APP: Image
Bio: Unknow, what is know of him is that his parents died 10 years ago and what's upside, also, when awakening to his Persona something went wrong, and it morphed into another Persona for a while, then got to Orphus again, also, he never puts off his headphones
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Re: Persona: A New World

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isnt this already a game?
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Re: Persona: A New World

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i think ur saying that becuz of the story thing, what i mean i that the story came from my memory of the game, and i corrected some things and added some things of the shadows and the Personas from Wikipedia

EDIT: also, i'll be needing someone who takes the characters of: Mitsuru, Akihiko, Junpei and yukari, if i start and no one is taking the chars, i'll control them until someone wants the place
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Name: Analise Gokuen
Age: 16
Year: Junior
Persona: Demongal (Death Arcana)
Image
Weapon: Greaves mostly, but Gauntlets as well and sometimes Bows
APP:
Image
Bio: Analise transferred to the High school due to problems that were beginning to surface around her. She soon gained the nicknames 'Jinx' Analise from the bad luck that affected everyone around her and would some have transferred again if not for a chance night that SEES stumbled upon her during the Dark Hour. It didn't take long to discover that Analise had awakened as a Persona-user without realizing it, and it was her Persona that was causing trouble. She joined their group and has been working to gain full control of her Persona. She was the newest member until Minato joined.
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Re: Persona: A New World

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Also, if you're interested about the dates and floors in tartarus and stats and stuff, PM me, i'll PM the RP members if there are changes or anything important (Man, what a good Persona RP Manager that i am:D)

EDIT: PM me if you know anthing about the evolving dates(When the personas morph etc), and i'll put the OC 'persona evolve' dates (man, I look like Haseo{ToD})
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i have a question is this an au rp because i was wondering if i could play as yosuke from P4
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((If you're willing to let me RP as Demi-Fiend (Hito-Shura), then I have a good idea as to how he could be interwoven into your story.))
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I don't think Azure would mind much if it means the RP gets off the ground.
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If that's the case, then...


Name: HitoShura. Alias; Demi-Fiend
Age: Being a half-demon, it's hard to determine exactly what his age is.
Year: As is the case with his age, his 'class' is also hard to define...
Persona: None at present
Weapon: HitoShura bears little need of a weapon, relying instead on the ingestion of creatures known as 'Magatama' to fuel his strength.
APP: Image
Bio: HitoShura is but one of the many oddities existing within the school. He does not attend lessons, and spends most of his time atop the roof, looking down on the city below, apparently waiting for something to occur. No-one knows when he started appearing within the school grounds, or why-despite his apparent longing to leave them-he seems to be 'attached' to them on a metaphysical level. He tends not to mind being approached by others, though his silent-and rather eerie-personality often causes those interested in him to seek out different companions. As a result of this, HitoShura is often seen alone. At some point, he was unwittingly drafted into the group due to his ability to use seemingly other-worldly powers-despite seeming to possess no persona whatsoever-though he is not fully aware of this fact himself.
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name: Akira Torimizu
age: 16
year: Junior
Persona: Izanagi
Weapon: 2 swords ( he's a duel blade weilder) and his fists
app: Image
bio: He's somewhat your normal high school kid or so he though until one night he found himself wandering around during the dark hour.....he was freaking out he was eventually saved by the members of SEES....he was found holding two iron pipes that he must of been using to defend himself against the shadows he doesnt like how his whole life changed because of his power he used to curse his power...but as his time With Sees increased he grew more fond of the others and has grown close to his friends and would gladly lay down his life for his comrades in arms what he wants most is to discover why he was chosen to have this power he's friendly and nice and calm and very easy to get along with and is polite but when called upon he will fight to protect his friends some kids find it hard to approach him because he lost both of his parents at a young age he's cursed his luck and allways thought that those near him would die so he doesnt like to let others close to him at times
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kk... im gonna have the events of p4 happen first 2008 and the trip to Iwatodai never happen further every one form P4 born 2 years earlier to make it fit
name: Yosuke Hanamura
age: 17 (18 by the end of this)
weapons: shriken, kunai, tomahawks
year: Junior (The events of thre au P4 caused youske to be held back)
App:Image
Bio:after the events of P4 Yosuke was still able to visit the midnight channel and summon his persona however his persona was in its original form of Jiraiya, a week after the end of persona 4 Yosuke's father went missing the only clue was letter that was written in 2 parts from the goddess Izanami herself. the first telling him she was being possessed by an entity that was the essence of death it self. The second telling him to find a miss Mitsuru Kirijo and join her group of investegaters and eventually he would learn the truth behind what/who was responsible he gets transfered to Gekkoukan High about a week later and the same night he arived at his new dorm he found himself in S.E.E.S and the other members where astounded that he didnt need an evoker to summon his persona.
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(Let's start then, also, Neko-Neko, you have played at least once "Steambot Chronicles"?, also )y'all, what's better? Minato talking or his usual super cool non speaking attitude)
He was sitting in there, calmly waiting for the bell to ring "....." as he listens to the teacher's lesson....

(Also, Kai, sorry, but you'll have to change your persona)
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(minato talking im tired of mute hero syndrom)
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(sorry for the double post this only applys if were starting at Gekkoukan high)
Yosuke was in his seat in the back corner of the classroom closest to the door with a bored expression on his face as the bell rang his expression lightened he got up and approached Minato's seat it was.
"Hey, names Hanamura Yosuke "
Yosuke extended his hand for a handshake
"I just got transfered here too a couple of weeks ago. i have a room in the same dorm as you."
Yosuke then noticed a blue butterfly fluttering near his seat he gave it a sideways glance confused.
'Huh? thats the same butterfly i saw follow Yu around from time to time... BUT THAT MEANS...'
Thought Yosuke in a panic as he realized what it meant as it floated towards Minato no one seemed to notice the butterfly except Yosuke and Minato. Yosuke reached in to his pocket and got his cell-phone out pretending to read a text.
" Sh#t Excuse me but something just came up."
Yosuke left the classroom after gathering his things leaving in a hurry.
'I have to tell that man on the roof that the thing Izanami warned me about in the letter happened'
(There where some parts of the letter i accidentally left out. that where warning for things to watch out for mainly doors that where invisible to most people and blue butterflies that were the same type that used to follow Yu (The protagonist of P4.) and if he ever saw them to come to the roof of the school and to tell a odd looking guy who hung out on the roof of the school about them and was to also mention that the goddess Izanami sends her regard or something to that nature.)
*Five minutes later on the roof. *
Yosuke had just found the man he was looking for a man with what looked like Japanese war paint on his face.
"excuse me but i was told to tell you if i saw any weird blue butterflies that around town to tell you where they are theres one in the classroom 2-A also..."
Yosuke stiffened as he said this next bit.
"the goddess Izanami sends her regards."
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(I though P4's MC's name was souji..)

"Huh?...." he saw Yosuke running off "...." he put his hands on his pockets as he get's up, then starts walking to the mall, in there he entered the Videogame store, and started playing a game, he planned on doing it until the sunset
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((In I jump. I'm assuming that poet's 'war painted' character isn't HitoShura...))

The sun hung low in the sky, casting long shadows across the sprawl of the city that stretched out below Gekoukan. There was a certain eerie quality about it; something almost ethereal, as if it weren't a sun at all, but a mere substitute for something far more majestic that had existed in an age long since passed. The sky too felt artificial; some random being's attempt at replicating something of beauty from vivid memories-memories which the being itself seemed to have doubted. It was an empty sky, unbound, yet not truly free.
There was no wind.
Observing time slowly pass over this lifeless sprawl was the figure of a young adult, appearing to be no older than a college student. He stood atop the roof's entry point, a blank expression covering his pale face. There was a strong sense of 'mystery' about him. This wasn't helped by his incredibly unusual appearance; his body-shirtless and well-built-was covered from head to toe in otherworldly markings, the edges of which pulsated with a dim, bluish glow. His eyes too, had a slightly off sense about them; their icy cold glare and unusual colouration made one feel as though they were looking right through you, peering into the depths of your soul.
He would have continued with this silent observation in peace-as he seemed to do for days on end regardless-were it not for the strange folk that had also decided to visit the rooftop on that particular day. They had caught his attention, and once something had caught his attention, he was not the type to idly shift his focus to another space within his field of perception. He watched intently as their conversation unfolded, then-upon hearing something unknown to him-uttered a simple word, one which broke his seemingly unending period of silence,"Iza... na.. mi?"
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((My...diligence... It's so horrible now... :cry: ))

In the back of classroom, surrounded mostly by empty decks near the window, Analise sat quietly working at her desk as the teacher finished up and the bell rang, ending classes for the day. The few people sitting near her almost immediately got ready and fled from her vicinity, one tripping and nearly falling as they did and glaring balefully at her before moving off. Not that anyone blamed him for the look. She'd already become known as a Jinx here and the fact that she herself didn't seem to receive any real misfortune herself just made things worse for her her. Needless to say, she really didn't have any friends here at Gekkoukan High. Rather, she had people that didn't quite avoid her like the Plague and everyone else. And so she simply continued to finish up her work and notes while people talked and left. She'd go back to the dorm later.
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Akira: {he gets up out of his seat as he fixes his goggles} phew man today was so boring { he looks over his shoulder} yo Analise-san...{ he walks over to her as he throws his back over his shoulder{ the bag in the app pic}...wanna head back to the dorm together I'm thinking of heading over there now.. { he streches as he waits for a response and unlike most he seemed relaxed and not afraid to be around her}
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(Actually, what i was going for the was gonna be open to your response since you responded as such we are gonna have a moment of Yosuke in a way interacting with himself, his persona, in this Rp i was gonna have sense this is AU. his persona would be this man Jiraiya from Naruto. The post will be what happens if azure-kite allows this. after this little interaction wit Jiraiya he wont have a physical body again outside his persona form.)
The man with the Japanese war paint seemed out of place as if he belonged in a different time he stayed motion less reading his book smiling a sort of perverted smile face that was until Yosuke finished speaking
"so..." the man puts down the book as a less perverted grin is put on his face. " Thats why i was summoned here souls arcana, for the past few hours you allow me to introduce myself..."the next thing he said sort of confused Yosuke abit, Jiraiya was saying this in a bored tone "thou art i and i art thou."
Yosuke was in total shock as he realized this man was his persona."but what how" Yosuke speechless "How is that possible! "
"Ask Izanami, because i really dont know, however i think we have had disturbed someones peace just now" Jiraiya turned toward the demi-fiend. "so what would a being so ancient be doing on a pubic high school"
(edit: the hero's name in the P4 anime will be Yu)
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((That idea seems a bit... well... vivid, if you ask me. I recommend that you talk this over with AK asap.
Also, don't beat yourself up about being unwilling to post, Neko. It happens to the best of us all the time :>.))


The sudden question hit HitoShura like a rock out of the blue. Ancient being? He didn't know how old he was. He'd been sitting where he had been for so long that he must have completely lost track of time. Or did he even lose track of time in the first place? He questioned himself again. For that matter, he didn't even understand why he had been sitting where he was for as long as he had been.
A public high school? Why did that strike a chord in his memories?
Ulterior motives? He felt as though there was something he had to do. No, it would have been better to say that he'd had this feeling for an immeasurable amount of time... but what did he have to do? What did he feel was a necessity? And for that matter, why was he even waiting around on-what was apparently-the roof of a public high school building?

He touched the side of his head with his hand, then opened his mouth in an attempt to speak, though no words came out. Had he forgotten how to speak? Did he even know how to speak in the first place? Possibly, but he hadn't done so for such a long space of time that it didn't seem to matter; his communicational abilities had all but vanished.

While in the midst of racking his brain for some other means of communication, a flicker of realization suddenly shot through his mind.
He was missing something.
Something important.

Why had he ignored this urge up until now? Maybe because he felt it was unnecessary? He hadn't moved for what seemed like aeons, so perhaps he'd just... forgotten.
He stood up, then jumped off of the roof, his eyes seeming to scream out to the world,"I'm hungry, I'm Hungry, I'M HUNGRY!"
He opened his mouth, and spoke yet another word... or at least tried to speak. It came out as if it were much more of a 'roar' than a simple statement;

"MAGATAMA!!!"


((PS: Please don't throw any random Magatama at HitoShura for the time being. I want him to find them at a later point, either with help from others or on his own.))
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