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First .hack drawing-need advice

Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:25 pm
by dothacker_terriermon04
hey guys,
this is like my first drawing from the world of .hack. it's mireille/mistral.
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i ate the rest of her body. lmao. yea, i kno it looks a little tacky, but hey, i'm a first time artist. anyways can u all post tips or maybe a website where i can learn how to draw characters from .hack good? if the board doesn't allow it then PM me the websites on how to draw .hack.
go ahead and post ur opinions here.

Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 1:25 am
by Xae-Solace
I like it... now it just needs a body, but really its good
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:33 pm
by dothacker_terriermon04
thanks, though i do need tips on how to make it better.

Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:13 pm
by ForbiddenEpic
okay now truthfully ihave no room to talk because your drawing is much much better then what i could do, but as a comment to make it even better the neck... it looks wrong to thin at the bottom, and if you were meaning to put her collar on her that could be better defined instead oflooking like one side collar the other neck

but other than that it looks really good, and I'm just trying to help you make it better ignore it completley if you wish just trying to help

Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:48 pm
by S1lentOp
It's a great start. You're very talented. Now you need you give her a body and a backround. The backround doesn't have to be fancy, but a character on a blank sheet is kind of... well... boring.

Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:53 pm
by dothacker_terriermon04
thanks for the remarks everyone! as soon as i have time i'll refine this drawing. keep the comments coming!

Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:34 pm
by jimi edwin douglas
good,very good!