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story: this world.....Asgard...it is split up into 7 different continents and ruled by the 6 kingdoms of valhalla when I was a child the first thing I rerember is of how everyone used to say how were at peace and look at our world the beauty is outstanding...but for a long time know alll I can rerember is of constantly fighting for my life..and for my comrades.... I wasz brought raised in the facility known as Guard...its a school meant for the sole purpose of molding youths into the future soldiers for Safadia kingdom...I don't know more like I dont see a purpose for all this fighting but since the discovery of the meteor crystal 12 years ago...this world has been entirely at war and Safadia has called in the help of Guard in their struggle in this war...we have been forced to fight for something so stupid as some sort of Artifact or Crystal...why whats the purpose in all this...I wonder all this wh'll we take the Light train to Navadia where it is rumored they are building some sort of weapon to use against the other kingdoms we have been assigned with the task of finding and destroying this weapon by any means necessary...my fellow Guard members...they've changed over the years..they've grown to enjoy fighting and become very agitated at the mere fact is they havent been in battle for too long they love to fight...it seems to me though that i'm the only one left..who can't seem to stand this war...what will be the result...what will happen to our world..I ask these questions time and time again...I wonder what is the purpose in this war for the meteor crystal


"a painful past, a filthy world, Revenge,God?,Human?, what is evil? no man is born evil he only simply chooses to be evil, but there is only one destination the Chosen., one destiny"

"IM NOT THE SAME AS YOU!"

classes: classes are similair to those in dot hack but there are some that resemble the FF series as well such as healer knight swordsman etc can also be asassin or gunslinger or beserker etc

the wolrd of asgard:

{ the start of the story takes place in Navadia look at the pic to see where that is}

template
name
age
class
race: human angel demon elf beastman etc
alignment: what kingdom are you with like what side did you join
weapon
abbilt(s)
app
bio

my character
name: Rain Alucard
age: 18
class: Twinblade//Multi weapon
alignment: GUARD/Safadia kingdom
race: human
weapon: mainregallion blade
sub crystal aquadra ( right arm)
sub: one the 12 sword of valhalla
abbility: he has great control over all sorts of magic and Rising breaker,Quatro slash, and Azure divider,Blazing slash
app:
bio: a member of guard.. on the mission to navadia kingdm to destroy their so called... secret weapon wants the fighting to end and he's very mature for his age { most of it is explained above and throughout the story}

((so one question is this like the real world or is it like a video game as in "The World"?))

name:Rainaan
age:17
class:Twin blade
race: human
weapon:Aleschecarium[looks like an angels wing]
abbilty(s):doesn't use them as often but are:Archons Folly, Ark Angel, and one Unknown
Alignment:GUARD/Safadia kingdom
app:http://lun2004.deviantart.com/art/Shadow-134208631

template:
name: Makoto kabuto
age:20
class:twin long blade
race:demon
alignment:Espica Empire
weapon: onyx, a super powerfull sword
abbilt(s): he is super fast and can teleport, he also is super skilled with the sword(the sword it's very heavy but he control'it like a kitchen knife)
app:
bio: he growed in a family that just wants to fight, he helped at the strategy and the fighting he's family was so proud of him that they give him a blade, they said it hide a special power and he trained hard, with the time he learned to control that power

( 2nd character)
name: Xanzion
age: 19
class: Twin lancer// Adept rogue
race: Humanoid
alignment: Espica empire
weapon: main: copy sleipnir { left arm}
Trans~ Gungnir and Longinus { the tridents in his hands}
abbilities: unknown
app:
bio: unknown... hes a member of the kings 6 elite Guards he became a captain at a young age he's a great soldier loyal though he is a spirted young youth even with all this war going around he allways keeps high spirits though he's been called the most annoying person alive hes unbeiveably strong though some of his past is unknown though rumor his he has some sort of relation to Odin of Reich gottes

((gotta love LusiferNazi))

( a few more people till we start maybe one or two and we'll start)

name: Asder Natrix
age: 18
class: Being of Devastation
race: Enhanced Human
alignment: Neutral
weapon: His arm witch is referred to as "The God's Dying Wish"
ability(s): With his body he can create orbs and of energy that create explosions when in contact with Asder's energy, the arm glows when energy is being secreted giving a warning that there will be an explosion. He beleives that he can create new ways of focusing the energy into a more Destructive force
app:
bio: He is hated by most of the factions, he fights only to make sure that the weapon is not used and that no harm comes to the meteor crystal. However with the security surrounding the weapon, he cannot get in close to the Navadia regions base where they are keeping the weapon, currently he hitched a ride on the light train with members of the guard and is keeping himself disguised under the name "Akio Hattori"

( i guess we can start)

Rain: { sitting on the light train his eyes are shut hes just listening to the sounds around him}

Guard member: heh you should of seen the last mission toward epsica man you should of seen it the alpha team was running across rooftops and jumping man we shot up and cut down everything in our path

guard member 2: yeah theres no way im gonna lost o you in this mission though wanna make the usual bet

guard member 1: you mean who can take out the most soldiers or who reaches the destination first

guard member 3: ohh count me in were gonna slaghter these navadia scum

Rain: ..........

{ theres an explosion}

Guard member 3rd platoon captain: OI looks like te actions starting early boys a sentry robot seems to have discovered our location now this things big so lets get rid of it early we have 40 minutes till we reach navadia central station { the guard members scramble and head to the location}

member: OI RAIN WE NEED your help too lets get moving

Rain: { he opens his eyes as he stands up and he opens the door as he climbs to the roof of the train} there you are { the sentry bot is huge about a little smaller then the size of one train car and its a bird like one}... now lets make this quick { he draws regallion the normal looking sword he weilds}

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Xanzion: { sitting on a different light train heading towards navadia from espica he decides to sit back as he stands up} man I'm soo bored...hey

Espica soldieR: what is it Xanzion sir

Xanzion: isnt one of the demon generals on this mission with us but why is that its a simple mission

Espica: yeah but I havent seen him...but your one of the elite and your on this mission

Xanzion: { sweat drop} well yeah uhhh thats of course... dismissed soldier

((oh i should clarify he joins GUARD after the first mission))

[the explosion goes off]

[he looks to the oncoming Light Train]

Rainaan(a.k.a Rai):that looks like it did! Come on Men! Too Arms [he grabbed a nearby short sword leaving his in its sheith] We cannot lose here!

Asder follows the members of guard outside mainly following the first GUARD member I can't afford to blow my cover, it's best to stay in a group of people. Asder looks up at the sentry in front of the train "Hmph, this is what they sent to stop US? The haven't got a chance in hell if that's what they are putting their hopes on! LET'S DESTROY IT!" Asder can't help but have a grin on his face after that flawless performance, if someone stared at him, they would think he's happy at the thought of battle, like most of the GUARD.

[he smiled as he saw Asder come out of the light train last, he pressed a button and several explosions went off destroying the light train and sending many of the GUARD sprawling]

Rai:now men! while we have the advantage! [he rushed the GUARD killing 7 before his sword met Asder's ]

Rain: { he readies his blade} now equals 30 minutes thats just enough time { he rushes the sentry bot} rggh { he slashes through the sentry bot as he jumps ontop of it as his 2nd blade in his app pic appears in his hand out of energy as he stabs through it he flips back wards} RISING BREAKER! { he rushes towards the bot and he runs his blades through knocking the bot out of commision his 2nd blade dissapears as he sheaths his regallion and he looks towards navadia and their pulling into the station} rgghh.. what idiot blew up the TRAIN! { he jumps off the train as he lands on the platform with the fellow guard members as he meets with his captain}

3rd platoon captain: allright heres the plan we will split up into 3 groups the first group Rain Alucard!... I want you and Akio Hattori to head over to randevous with the sergeant of the army he'll explain in details the mission plan { he assigns the groups} now you 3 head to the town square the rest of us.. shall strom the factory holding their secret weapon.. once you rendevous head over there your selfs... you boys better be ready... our intel shows a group of soldiers heading this way}

Rain: sir { he starts heading towards the center of the city} don't fall behind { they get ambushed by a group of soldiers} hey you can fight right { he draws excellion as rai shows up} STAND DOWN! { he holds Excellion up to Rai's neck} even if your a member of Safadia's army you don't dare draw your blade on a member GUARD

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Xanzion: were almost there.. { he looks out the window and notices a commotion} huh!? Whats going on { he runs to te front of the train to try to get a good view to figure out the situation}

Asder kicks up a fallen Gaurd Member's blade in time to block Rai's attack Dammit, this fool is in to close, i have to push him back. upon hearing Rain Asder speaks in a rough voice "I can hold my own, i've had tough fights before!" Asder breathes in I'm no expert in blades, my best option is to create a distraction big enough for him, then i can get away and find the weapon. Asder is pushed back by Rai "You don't seem scared of a proud GAURD member such as myself!" Asder readys the blade I can't blow my cover with an explosion, i'll just have to rely on luck. Asder charges Rai

Rain: i wont say it again...dammit stand down both of you! { he stops his blade in between the 2 deadlocking} this is no time to be fighting amongst our selfs we have company heading this way { guard robots and soldiers head in their direction} get ready { he readies his blade

[as Asder strikes the shortsword out of his hand and he unsheiths Aleschecarium as he spins he cuts asders guard sword in half]

Rai:[mumbling to where asder can only barely hear him] i can't lose...not here not when Raina still needs me...i can't afford to lose, i can't afford to lose

[he knocks the hilt out of asders hand]*Another life taken*

Rain: Tch { he ignores the two fighting as he starts fighting off enemy soldiers and he starts cutting through the guard robots as he clears a path}

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Xanzion: { he jumps from the light train as he kicks a soldier in the head as he lands on a soldier filled train platfomr} ohh nice a welcoming committee { energy gathers in his hands as his spears appears} lets go

"Okay, this might acctualy be fun!" Asder runs away from Rai and jmps into the crowd readies himself for battle "You soldiers are far out classed!" Asder sprints to the nearest robot and jumps behind it vanishing in the crowd Heh, they can't see my powers being used if i use these enemies as camoflauge! after Asder is in the middle of the crowd he creates and orb of light in his hand, before any soldiers can scream out his true identity he makes it explode and is launched with the explosion back to Rain "One of those damn machines blew itself up! What an idiotic way of trying to kill someone!" Asder stand up and readies to fight Rai again "Prepared to die?"

makoto jumps into the train as he could and see zanxion, huh? hey general, long time no see, so are you going too?

Rai:Does that mean your ready for a real fight?![under his breath] truth is...i'm terrified...but i have to protect them...[he holds both swords at the ready waiting for Asder to attack] NAVADIA DEFENSE FORCE ITS TIME[many troops begin to fall into place behind him]

Rain: yo Akio... I'm gonna go on ahead... finish up with this guy here { he sheaths his blade as he runs to the center of the city and he looks at the landscape of the know damaged buildings and ruined areas he unsheaths regallion as he runs towards a wave of soldiers} I dont have time to deal with you!

GUARD: { the entire guard force keeps the reinforcements at bay at the station platform as they start making their way to the factory}

Rain: { he meets up with Rash a sergeant of sefadia} Sergeant

Rash: Rain alucard.. is it its been ages I wish we met under different circumstances my friend..

Rain: yeah nows not the time...you have to code right

Rash I got it right here { he passes rain a disk} take this...it should shut down their weapon

Rain: btw what is this so called weapon

Rash: its a meteor crystal elemental cannon...

Rain: WHAT?! but one blast from something like that and the entirety of safadia can be wiped out

Rash: thats why were here kid...now hurry and meet up with the rest of Guard

Rain: { he heads towards the factory}

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Xanzion: yo makoto...so your te demon general they sent?... { he kicks open the train door} I'll see you down there general { he jumps as he kicks a navadia defense force member in the head as he knocks him into a group of guard members} heh { as he stands up straight he cracks his neck as energy forms in his hands and his spears appear} allright now this is what I call a party lets go Espica!... oi makoto try to keep up with me { he rushes a group of defense and guard members as espica members start emptying from the train}