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[he twisted his head up to the sky, it appeared as though he was smelling the air]

Exia:*That noise....haha hahaha*

[He elbowed Minato in the stomach and flipped him over his shoulder]

Exia: Finally....

[he rushed off towards the smell of infected blood, sword at the ready]

Kazuma: { he looks at the last group} ANNILATING SECOND BULLET! { he soars at them at high speed as the 2nd wing dissapears as he punches through them and theirs another explosion} thats the last { he grabs the side of a buildint as he punches the ground and he flips through the air landing on the roof} elimination sucessful { his arm turns to normal as he starts to walk away}

((S-Cry-Ed huh?))

[His blade lashed out cutting an infected in half, then keeping with the motion he spun flinging the blood off his blade and stopped the chipped tip a millimeter away from Kazuma's neck]

Exia:Did you get hit? The infection spreads that way..to us i mean....the ones who benefit from the moon.*we are the real mutants....*

{only the fist and name)

Kazuma: { he glances of his shoulder}.......eh { he looks at his sword and then to him}.....what the hell is this buzz off

Exia:hmm You don't seem to be a part of the resistance...[he sheathed his sword] you're all right by me then. watch out for them though they don't hesitate to kill if you have contact with the infected. nice power by the way.

hmph so you don't have a cure? you'r killing'em? well if that's so minato makes appears a sword has he put his gun in a pocket well let's kill oh im minato nice to meet u kazuma minato appears at kazuma's side

(((.....................?????)))

Exia: not you again!

( how do u know my characters name?)

KAzuma:...whatever I'm out of here { he jumpsoff the roof top and he lands on a lower rooftop} I got to head home! { je starts running out of sight of the others}

((i was wondering that too....))

Exia:[he put his his blade to minato's throat]thats it. i've had it.

what do you think im an infected? well your thinks are as same as bad as your reflexes minato appears in the back of exia and put his sword in his neck but im not killing you..... i promised to protect you

Exia: Fu** off! [he spun and his blade caught Minato's leg causing him to fall backwards, and as he was off balance Exia chased after Kazuma hoping to lose Minato somewhere along the way]

Kazuma: LEAVE ME ALONE! { he jumps from rooftop to rooftop}

???what did i say to you? we want those 2 alive his abilitys are splendid c'mon go for them(it dessapears) minato appears close to exia and follow him HEY YOU MORON YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THE WORD PROTECT? I WANT TO ''PROTECT'' ''YOU'' if you want kazuya well im going for him minato appears in exia's side grab him then appears in kazuya's side then teleport them into the park again well if you want to die just wander around there but if you want to live stay with me ok? if you die they will kill me and kill you too

Exia: Thats it! [he jammed his katana into Minato pinning him to the ground and then looked to Kazuma] Hurry![they both dashed for the forest]

uurrgg.. ok minato catches to says something to them OK BUT IF SOMEONE TRY TO KILL YOU DON'T COME TO ME!!!!! the mysterious man appears in front of exia and kazuya and knocks them, they atack the mysterious man but nothing works, the mysterious man put's a blade in kazuya's neck

( okay ummmmmm.... how did I get involved in all this? I wasent even planning on actually having mch contact with you 2 until later)

((Ok we need to establish some stuff here, Kai i might need your help with this one

You need a bit more sentence structure, it helps the story flow, also a lot of the things your doing just doesn't flow well. And your Also making it impossible for us to tell your words from other peoples))

minato appears and slash the mysterious man i tell you that im protecting them
???: so i don't have to kill you, well im returning later to see how are you doing( it desapears and minato says) well what do i said to you? if you do that again, i could not appear and you could die