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Soma: { kicks the door open and he shuts it once Terra and Aella make it into the building}.... * breathing heavily* { he barricades the door}......allright that should hold them off for now { he opens up a holographic map} okay were here and their located on the other side of this building now if we take the back entrance out of this building it should be a few blocks until we reach the destination now the problem is...how do we get out once we meet up with them?...any ideas you two? { he sets his blade down against the wall as he sits down}..we have 5 minutes before the aragami break through the barricade
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((Seriously, why do you care if he repeats stuff?))

"Not a clue" He sighed and layed down his sword. "I'm not one for tactics"
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((OOC: It is much easier and preferable to read something good, and his work would be a lot better this way. I am not forcing it on him, I am simply suggesting it. I am actually quite confused why everybody does not follow this rule :/ It seems rather obvious and common in great literature. I am only trying to help.))

The propellers commenced their spinning; slashing through the air like great blades. Sounds burst out from the helicopter an after less than three minutes they were off the ground and headed toward Shibuya.

Typical sat back in a chair and grinned his toothy grin. "Yes, just a few more minutes now and I can feed the hunger inside. Just a few more minutes." His left eye twitched, but apart from that his eyes remained focused on a random point in the helicopter, not even blinking.
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Soma: {he looks to terra} yeah this isn't tactics we just need to get to.the othersd while their still alive {his eyes become serious as he picks up his blade} allright here's the plan were gonna fight our way to the survivors cleave through this horde
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((I tend to do that in my posts at times. Doesn't mean that all people have to live up to great literature. Polished work comes from a lot of editing.))

Aella wondered vaguely if that was even a plan. Still, the leader was Soma. You followed your leader even if it meant death. That was what-

"We have to retreat! If we don't then we'll be stuck here!"

"No, if we retreat our efforts will be in vain ----!"


Her eyes showed emotion for a split second, going back to normal right after. Whatever that was, it must not have been that important.
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((It's just an Rp it doesn't matter. Not all of us have as great of writing skills as other people do. Helba's right. Great literature goes threw a lot of editing))

"Right....We could make a mad dash for it and just chop down everything in the way."
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(sorry I'm late, I've been busy... sleeping.)

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bio: Woke up one day with his house's roof missing, a "Witness" informed him that an Aragami had attacked. Ash's parents disappeared but weren't ever declared dead. Where he lived, people were always optimistic, it shows in his personality. He had joined fenrir a month after the attack.
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Soma: { he readies his blade by his side} allright its just a few blocks from this station if were talking abut old shibuya but dont let your guard down....and I know Im not fit to be a leader....dont worry I ll make sure nothing happens out there { he kicks the back door and it flys off its hinges due to old and rust} Whoops..{ the aragami look towards him} RUN! { he runs down the road cleaving through and cuttring down any aragami in his way}
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((OOC: Come on guys, you are not being fair. I did not compare his or anybody else's work to great literature, I simply stated a simple tactic one can apply to their work that is used in great literature. And it is quite simple. I realise this is a role play, but nonetheless good grammar skills are required in the rules and thus making simple improvements to one's writing should be simple and expected. It is not even something that should take too much effort. Just add a full stop every here and there when you notice you have repeated a word. And
shugo_lover wrote:...Not all of us have as great of writing skills as other people do. ...
That is exactly why I made the recommendation, it will help greatly. Now I am rambling on like a fool -.- I am only trying to suggest very, very, very simple to apply improvements.))

The helicopter reached the town and Typical pulled the door open to peer down.

"Look at them," He said in a low, growling voice, "Those must be my teammates being chased." He let out a roar of a laugh; evil and mocking at the same time.

He tore the guns from their holsters and proceeded to fire shots into the skulls of Aragami nearing his teammates. He halted to yell, "Yeah! Go for the goals!" laughed, and continued firing.

"Sir, where should I let you down?" The pilot said, leaning over his chair slightly.

"Screw that, I'm gonna watch how this plays out."
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He quickly looked up seeing a red blur.
A person? Possibley are missing team mate?
He quickly pulled out his sword slashing agarami in half.
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Aella grasped a group of Arigami from behind her, binding them together with her chain. She propelled them towards the large group in front, causing an explosion once again. With so many Arigami there would be no time for individual destruction. Her body moved at a rapid pace, ready to grasp another few and use them if it was necessary.
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Soma: { running through the horde} RAAAHHH!!! { he slams the ground with his blade as he flips over Aella's weapon as it strikes an aragami he comes down on that same aragamis head with his blade as it eneters predator mode and bites a huge chunk of the aragami off as Soma keeps running it forms into the blade mode again as he cleaves through the aragami}.....Were almost there.... { he looks to see the barrier field around an abandoned run down hospital} damn their surrounded allright we have to clear a path and then enter the field we'll work on a way out afterwards { his blade forms into the gun mode which is a cannon as he fires 3 shots causing massive explosion wiping out the big aragami as it switches back to blade mode he dashes at a scorpion looking aragami and its tail starts striking at soma as he keeps dodoing at a great speed by rolling and jumping and dashing acorss the ground as he closes in on the aragami and slams his blade into it's skull} how are u two holding up!?.. damn { he rips his blade out of the aragami's skull and he covers aella blind spot by cleaving an aragami in half as he looks towards terra} Terra!... Cover my left! * were almost there once we reah the target their shoulnt be a problem
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"I'm on it!"
His sword quickly turned into beast form and ran towards the aragami devoring the aragmi that was going after soma.
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Soma: { he carves a path through the aragami as he looks up his hoodie blood stained along with some of his hair}... damn I really liked this hoodie! { he spots the barrier feild as he stands infront of Aella and Terra} now RUN!......my job is to make sure my teamates make the destination...or we alll go together! { he readies his blade} allright start moving I'll catch up after I finish off this one! { he runs at a significantly large Aragami} now go AND FEAST! { his blade morphs into predator mode}
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Aella's eyes narrowed, turning to look at Soma. He was going to pull the hero routine that all God Eater's seem to like to pull when squad leaders. She wouldn't allow that, not even if he was capable of killing it himself. She sent her weapon out, letting the chain wrap around each limb to hold it down. She did not tell Soma anything about running or to cover her. He was the leader and her job was to support the leader. Even if it meant she would be lost.
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Typical fired two bullets, managing to stop an Aragami that was about to attack Aella from behind while she was preoccupied. Then he sighed.

"Not much action going on. But if I jump down now, I won't have the best seat in the house." He fired off a few more shots killing some stray Aragami.

"What the hell," He reached over the chair to farewell the pilot, then jumped out, sliding the door closed behind him. As he free fell, Typical spun, head first, shooting down the creatures that would be immediately where he would land. Moments before his head was to smash into the ground he flipped and landed in a crouching position with a grin.
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Soma: { he rams his god arc into the Aragami as predator mode feasts on the aragami and then growls}..what still hunger damn.... { it morphs back to blade mode as he looks towards Aella}....*she just helped me.........hmmmm* allright then u 2 time to run! { he runs towards the barrier Feild} OPEN IT UP! NOW! { he cleaves tghrough Ny opposing aragami as he makes it through the barrier with Aella and Terra}.....Allright.... now lets go find those stranded guys they have to be inside the hospital somewhere}....should we split up and take different floors { he throws his god arc over his shoulder}
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Holding her chain in her hands still, Aella was only awaiting Soma's orders. "You are the leader, make the decision that best suits the team." She spoke, not being mean or nice with her tone. In missions she had to remain neutral to all things of that nature. Reality being that most leaders failed to lead their squad in an effective way. If Soma truly wasn't ready for this mission, she'd know soon.
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Soma: { hands them both communication devices} Radio in if you find them or spot anything suspicious I'll take the 3rd floor Aella Take the 2nd Terra cover the first floor { he walks up the stairs and he looks around the ruined hospital} damn the power is out its hard to see but not that bad hmmm { he walks down the hallway and looks at the destruction} Hey anyone here....{ he looks through the rooms}
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