I've seen very few fanfictions here, so...

[Guardian Ubiquitous]

...I'm going to go out on a limb and post mine.

I've noticed people have posted barely any .hack fanfictions in this forum, and one I've found had its topic locked because of flamers.

I've decided to take a chance and post mine, fully understanding the risk I will be taking... I only request that you do take the time to read it throughly and be helpful and honest with your reviews.

Be forewarned, its a bit long and some of you may not have the patience to read what I have done of it thusfar. Also, please this keep in mind, it is an AU (alternate universe). I was trying out an original idea with it, and would kindly like an opinion or suggestion from those who read it.

I will admit, my grammar is not the best (however, it is not the worst either). Please be honest and offer advice.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2169533/1/

I've also put up a little poll. Please be honest with your vote.

Thank You. *bows*

[Stitches_OFire]

As an avid reader of fan fiction, I'd have to give this 4.5/5. However, the young, bad A girl thing is a bit way out of there, even for an AU, don't you think? Anyway, good fic.

BTW, perhaps you should have posted this in the General Chat, or Off Topic, or something similar. Anways, GJ.