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Azure crow wrote:(Bulletcatcher:)

As dorali kicked the tree,a very large,crowned chim fell out.
"Well."Komara said.
"That's a king chim.You just got lucky."
"W-Woah." Dorali ran around to it as it bounced slowly around the tree. He kicked it once, but it didn't work. He kicked another time, but it wasn't budging. As he was about to kick again, the King Chim leaped into the air and fell on Dorali, sucking up chim spheres. He tapped the kick button as fast as he could. After three shots, the chim fell and rolled around a little, but then it got back up and tried to jump on Dorali again. Dorali quickly evaded and kicked it three more times. It finally stopped moving and various purple chim spheres circled around Dorali and came to his inventory.
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(Bulletcatcher)

"Alright,that was a king Chim,as i said."
A quest NPC in town will buy certain items you get off them,called Chim Crowns,for a messly 1000gp.Your better off trading them to others.
Anyway,they are very rare,but they give you 50 chim spheres."
He walked back and forth with his eyes closed,like a teacher,as he talked.
He turned to Dorali and raised a finger,as if to show a point.
"You have well enough to activate the gate,go ahead and use the chimporter."

((You know,I'm listening to Numa Numa right now for some reason,and it seems to fit the immpression of Komara I have right now.))
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Tsugasa sighed "Basically when you hit a monster enough imes, they swirl with blue green and red and purple rings. at that point when you perform a skill trigger it'll be called a rengeki finish."
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(Tsugasa/Crow)


"I never asked what the Rengeki was,just if the Awakening is the same as it.
You know,powerfull hits,overwellming feeling.
That sort of thing."
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AO looked at Kite. he was confused for some reason.

"Wa...wasn't there...another?" he asked Kite.
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"for me its natural, for you, you might have a seizure if you do it again..." Tsugasa turned around and continued north, a small pack of Celestial Busters following behind him
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"Wa...wasn't there...another?"

" I think there was...he....he was called...ba...balmung. have.....you....heard...from him?" Kite asked with a smile.
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(azalan:Hint hint Haeoxth's storyline hint hint)
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Azure crow wrote:"Alright,that was a king Chim,as i said."
A quest NPC in town will buy certain items you get off them,called Chim Crowns,for a messly 1000gp.Your better off trading them to others.
Anyway,they are very rare,but they give you 50 chim spheres."
He walked back and forth with his eyes closed,like a teacher,as he talked.
He turned to Dorali and raised a finger,as if to show a point.
"You have well enough to activate the gate,go ahead and use the chimporter."
"Um, alright." He hurried over to the white warp point. As he approached it, an option list opened up and he selected the option to feed the portal. Five chim spheres emptied out from his inventory and went into the machine, turning it green and adding another option to the list. Once he selected the new option, his character was surrounded in familiar rings of light and he was transported to another side of the field.
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"Ba-ba-Balmung...?" AO stuttered.
"Balmung...Balmung..." he kept saying, as if trying to absorb the name.
"Balmung..." he said again, finally remembering.

"He...was...the one with....wings....right?" AO asked Kite.
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Bulletcatcher wrote:
Azure crow wrote:"Alright,that was a king Chim,as i said."
A quest NPC in town will buy certain items you get off them,called Chim Crowns,for a messly 1000gp.Your better off trading them to others.
Anyway,they are very rare,but they give you 50 chim spheres."
He walked back and forth with his eyes closed,like a teacher,as he talked.
He turned to Dorali and raised a finger,as if to show a point.
"You have well enough to activate the gate,go ahead and use the chimporter."
"Um, alright." He hurried over to the white warp point. As he approached it, an option list opened up and he selected the option to feed the portal. Five chim spheres emptied out from his inventory and went into the machine, turning it green and adding another option to the list. Once he selected the new option, his character was surrounded in familiar rings of light and he was transported to another side of the field.
(Bulletcatcher)

The platform your on now has two enemy parties,a chest,and no chim trees.
It's also a dead end.
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(OOC: Crow, what do i have to do with haseoxth's storyline?)
"Ba-ba-Balmung...?" AO stuttered.
"Balmung...Balmung..." he kept saying, as if trying to absorb the name.
"Balmung..." he said again, finally remembering.

"He...was...the one with....wings....right?" AO asked Kite.

" Yes.....but.....I.....have not....heard from him....shall we search for.....him together?" Kite said in his usual tone.
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Azalan wrote:(OOC: Crow, what do i have to do with haseoxth's storyline?)
"Ba-ba-Balmung...?" AO stuttered.
"Balmung...Balmung..." he kept saying, as if trying to absorb the name.
"Balmung..." he said again, finally remembering.

"He...was...the one with....wings....right?" AO asked Kite.

" Yes.....but.....I.....have not....heard from him....shall we search for.....him together?" Kite said in his usual tone.
((Remember,a feather floated down and caused the interferance?Well,there you go.
"The winged man."))
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((Ah, I see...Well, time to take the easy route out! Just in case:
Im deciding this post is non-canon unless someone approves it!))

"Se-search...for...Balmung....." AO said, still a little confused.
"Balmung...Balmung...search...contact." He muttered to himself.
"Aagh!" AO yelled, grabbing his head. There was pain, excruciating pain! Words fluttered into his mind, and he instinctively spoke them as they came. "Delta.....Her.....Voluptous.....Berserker....." he said, gasping.

And then the pain was gone.
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(OOC: I am officially confused please explain waht happened. are we still going to go look for balmung? or did we find him? Rengeki, the post above this one has to be canon otherwise, we have wasted time haveing AO(Azure Orca), and AK(Azure Kite) meet back up again!)
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((Nope, I posted the area words for where Balmung was last seen in haseoxths story-just as a minor plot device))
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(So are we going to go there, and get him? or what? or do we just continue with what AO, and AK are doing.)
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((Its up to you-make your choice clear in your next post. (Whatever way you choose, to look for him or not, we're gonna run into him eventually.) ))
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(OOC: Yeah, you have a point. For now though, lets just train. We should do this together, that way, AO, and AK can get used to each others company, I mean its been a while ya know?)

"Lets us...train and....get more.....powerful so.....that we....will be...able to....be effective....at fighting....when we... meet Balmung..." Azure Kite said with a smile. He then turned to a group of goblins that had sneaked up on them.

"Lets go! we'll start with these pesky little things, and then we will move to something bigger! unless you have something more powerful in mind...." kite said in his normal tone of voice.
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(Crow:Balmung)

Balmung fluttered down to the groud.
He didn't have any wings,but they still worked effectivly in there spine form.
He landed almost elequantly,looking around.
He had seen a battle,and had interfered without thinking first.Now the battle was over,it seemed,and the area was totally under his control for training and lotting.
He walked through it,aimlessly,searching for monsters in the area.
And of course,the boss monster.
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