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I do know that fingers have 3 joints, but I don't know how to draw it yet.i like this very much but now a few small critiques. more work on the hand, many people forget that fingers have 3 joints not 2. also, the headline should not extend to her neck but to the jaw line
I understand why you drew the birds like that, most likely to ease up on the work you had to put into the drawing.Gardenia wrote:If you look at the birds on the background..
teehee, yea i know, only a lil kid would draw birds flying like that.
But I think it looks neat that way.
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The bird on her hand has a name.
It's "Nine tails".
- - -I do know that fingers have 3 joints, but I don't know how to draw it yet.i like this very much but now a few small critiques. more work on the hand, many people forget that fingers have 3 joints not 2. also, the headline should not extend to her neck but to the jaw line
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What is a "headline" ?..
the back of the head you have extending into the bottom of her neck.Gardenia wrote:If you look at the birds on the background..
teehee, yea i know, only a lil kid would draw birds flying like that.
But I think it looks neat that way.
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The bird on her hand has a name.
It's "Nine tails".
- - -I do know that fingers have 3 joints, but I don't know how to draw it yet.i like this very much but now a few small critiques. more work on the hand, many people forget that fingers have 3 joints not 2. also, the headline should not extend to her neck but to the jaw line
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What is a "headline" ?..
No,she is -not- Epitaph Wavemaster.(Ok, I am dumb as a rock.. but quick question... is that epitaph_wavemaster? Considering her link is to an invisionfree board thing with epitaph wavemaster in the title.. o_0;Wink
Actually Aera, I have to disagree about the hands. It looks as if the hand should be like that and that the 3 joints were put into effect. On one of the fingers it looks as if it is bending upwards, which would suggest Gardenia knows what he is doing. I might be completely wrong and it was just a simple coincidence, but even if he did forget about the joints or had no knowledge of them, in this picture it wouldnt have been needed. But this is no offence to you Miss Aera, I simply disagree with the hand statement.Aera wrote:i like this very much but now a few small critiques. more work on the hand, many people forget that fingers have 3 joints not 2. also, the headline should not extend to her neck but to the jaw line. The angle of her face is tilted nicely but i would work on her expression. not so sure what its supposed to be looking at hor how it feels. I very much like the ruffles in the clothes and the knee shouldnt be as pointed but overall it's a lovely picture. a great improvement
Everyone has their weaknesses, and mine is..1. All you characters heads appear to constantly be in 'almost' the same position. You should experiment more. I put almost in bracettes because the positions are not exactly the same, maybe the word i shouldve used was perspective... i dunno.
Again,I like those kind of eyes.2. The eyes are almost always the same as well as the character style. Variety is the spice of live, no? You should try to incorporate many different styles into your pieces not just one style, even if that is what your most comfortable with. You seem to have become very adpet at this style (which im assuming was self taught much like my style) meaning you should try and learn other styles. A drawing shouldnt always be cute, correct. This style wouldnt suit a very dark picture now would it. I believe you should practice other styles.
Yea, i'd be glad.Thats all ive got right now. Once I get out of my drawing slump I suggest we become friends, I have a feeling we could learn a lot from each other.
So,your drawings must be fun to look at, always something different.And unlike you Gardenia, my eyes are always changing. It's because I'm not good at replicating, so I can't exactly draw the same thing again.
