So how do you create somebody like Atoli?

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So how do you create somebody like Atoli?

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Atoli is kind and naive, but also very fragile. I've seen Trilogy so I won't spoil it for everyone, so the biggest thing is how she wants Haseo to "look at her" and of course  she gets upsets because she thinks Haseo sees Shino and not her.

This question might not make any sense, but I'm a writer and how to you BUILD someone with that personality? :?
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I always saw Atoli as a bit more like Haseo...
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Tack wrote:Atoli is kind and naive, but also very fragile. I've seen Trilogy so I won't spoil it for everyone, so the biggest thing is how she wants Haseo to "look at her" and of course  she gets upsets because she thinks Haseo sees Shino and not her.

This question might not make any sense, but I'm a writer and how to you BUILD someone with that personality? :?
Atoli is represented Polar opposite to Haseo, She has a hard life in the Real World, while Haseo has a hard life in The World.
Yet to Haseo he is always reminded by the person he cared about most and suddenly vanished by Atoli's PC.
I know most people hate these two together...
But I believe they were made for each other
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CirilloPrimo wrote:I know most people hate these two together...
But I believe they were made for each other
Haseo/Atoli is actually about as close to canon in G.U. as you can get. I don't understand the hate.
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Just cause most fans don't like characters who
act all pushy and find their voices annoying
And are like "Omg, let's go to a field!"
I like to view opinions from both sides.
And since my best friend hates Atoli to no end she'll vent what
she thinks of her lol
And the fact that they are actually a true pairing (look at the end of GU and trilogy, come on!)
the signs are there!!!
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There are too many people who see Atoli in a terribly shallow light and hate her as a result. She has almost as much depth as Haseo and develops easily as much as him over the course of the series.

Plus, most of how she acts is a facade...
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Okay, let me rephrase the question, how can I draw depth and development from her?
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That's really tough to say, imo... sorry I can't be of any assistance.
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Well, for one thing, you're going to want to see more than Trilogy. Everyone is pretty two-dimensional in that movie. Have you played the GU games, or read any of the manga or novels?
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GyppyGirl2021 wrote:There are too many people who see Atoli in a terribly shallow light and hate her as a result. She has almost as much depth as Haseo and develops easily as much as him over the course of the series.

Plus, most of how she acts is a facade...
It's because, (Aside from her AIDA infected self in //TRILOGY) Atoli's not as hot or as sexy as the other G.U. vixens, and doesn't carry a set of medicine balls in her chest. I mean, people thought BO would be a hotter match for Haseo. BO for God's sake.-_-
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Bo can be explained by shotacons.

Atoli's adorable >_< I think she's really the only female in G.U. I could consider attractive...
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GyppyGirl2021 wrote:Bo can be explained by shotacons.

Atoli's adorable >_< I think she's really the only female in G.U. I could consider attractive...
I agree, but she's "too" cute, as in, she's the type of innocent girl that can easily be taken advantage of. Sakaki brought this flaw out on the spotlight through the majority of G.U. Don't get me wrong though. Alkaid's a dumbass, Shino's a manipulative ****. Bourdeax's just ugly, Pi's old, and even my darling Natsume's a crazy demented stalker. I'd pick Atoli over this bunch anyday, simply because she's "normal" . :/
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I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks all of the above. Even though I like Bordeaux, she's not that pretty.
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I don't dig the lesbian buzzcut style hair. Only flaw.
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I'm not fond of her choice of attire too, but that's me. XD
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Pi isn't old. She's only 24. Maybe a bit old for Haseo at the moment but your early twenties is not old.
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She certainly has an "old hag" attitude. And, well, that is possibly one of the most disturbing character designs ever... sorry, but breasts should never, ever, ever be that big. XD
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Oh, I'm pretty sure Japan has produced character designs much more disturbing than Pi's. Just look at Queen's Blade. :P

And I really don't get how her attitude is like that of an old hag's.
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Pi doesn't actually have an "old hag" attitude, and Haseo says that just more for the reason of bothering her >3>
She has more of the attitude of a mature teacher/scientist, and sure, while put together with the personallities of players ranging from 11-18 years old, she does stand up for being "older" and "more mature" than the rest, even in her voice, but not nearly enough to SERIOUSLY seem like an old hag.
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That's a good point, actually. She's definitely more mature than Kuhn. >_>
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