Legend of the black cat!

[shugo_lover]

Ok well this a story I thought of. I don't think its good at all, I can only write good storys if a good idea pops into my head unfortunently by the time I get of my lazy butt the idea is gone. Don't laugh at some of the names (I had writers block for names)...So Tell me what you think. I find it rather hard to write in present time, normaly I don't write it this way but I thought hey why not? may as well give it a whirl.




What are legends? What do people deffine as not possible? What are creaters and monsters that stalk the night? What is it that they say can't exist? Heros and legends, Vampires and Werewolves, Greek myths like medusa, Dragons and griffins.
I never really thought much about them. I always heard about them in books and movies. The only ones Ive ever found fasinating were the storys about creatures that were out at night. The greatist vampire legends and clans of werewolfes.
Little did I know that I was about to become a legend of my own and meet those that stalk the night.




Ch.1

"Hey Tsukasa! Where have you been?"
"Uh sick!" I lied. I really just skipped school so I could go wonder off in the woods. I always thought of that place interesting and strange.
"Wait, you didnt go off wondering of into the woods did you?"
but for some reason people dislike me going there.
"No of course not!"
Maybe its because of the storys about it. People dissappearing, weird noises being heard from it at night, some even say theres a mysterious building that can only be found at night, during the day its gone.
"Ack! Tsukasa! You've heard the storys about that place!"
"Yeah, Yeah......" I sigh. Slideing my headphones over my ears. It's the begining of autemn. The leaves are falling. ITs freezeing cold, but I still wear the same thing. I always do. A short black skirt, my plain black black socks, my plain black shoes, my watmd brown jacket, and my red and black striped scarf. My hair is always put up the same. My short shoulder length hair, sliver. Always pulled back in a pony with my long bangs drapeing over the side of my face and the pony spiked up in the back.
Holland was still conserned about me as ever. She looks at my legs everyday with disaprovel. She thinks I'm scattered brained to be wearing skirts in the middle of winter. We walk in to school in the cold everyday. The yellow and orange colored leaves lying on the sidewalk and street brightened up the grey gloomy morning.
"Hey Tsukasa!!!!"
I turn around and find Roxas running up to us. Yeah I know what your thinking. Isnt that the name of that one guy from that one video game? Well yes...but we love her anyway.
"So glad to see you!" She huffs finally stoping in front of us."Have you heard Tsukasa?"
"Heard what?"
"The new story!" she huffs again, trying to catch her breath.
"Story?" Holland put in.
"About the woods!"
"Oh tell me!"
"People are saying theres a ghost cat stalking the woods now."
"A cat?" Thats sounds so lame inless its some kinda soul sucking cat.
"Yes a cat!" She huffs finaly catching her breath
"Sounds kinda lame if you ask me!"
"Actualy....." She looked around makeing sure no one else could see. I can see unease in Hollands eyes,doesnt surprise me though shes always afraid.
"I think we shoul-"
"Count me out!" Holland quickly blurted out and ran off inside the school building. We both just blankly look in the direction she disappears.
"As I was saying. I think we should go check it out!"
"but its daylight."
"Exactly that way we can skip school and not worry Holland."
"Ok! Lets go!" Smileing. Happy that I" know some one that shares my sense of adventure.



So what do you think so far? Did the story catch your eye? Did it make you want to keep reading? Are the character likable? Any interesting or fav. characters? Also is the plot good?

[Arisato]

sounds ok if your into that kinda stuff

[shugo_lover]

What do you mean into that kind of stuff? Vampires yes, but don't worry in my world they burst into flames, not sparkle

[Arisato]

haha always plagued ay twilight, i have a feeling that thats not all the characters and what was the inspiration?

[shugo_lover]

Honsetly I have no idea. I was listening to a trailer thing on tv that sounded kinda kool and I think talking about stuff like that.

[Arisato]

needs some improvements but it at least holds together well

[shugo_lover]

Yeah well I'm not good at makeing storys in present tense or whatever its called.

[Arisato]

i am only good at third person so not1000% good at first

[shugo_lover]

Your not alone. I think most storys are in third person because its easier to write that way.

[Arisato]

i kinda like it so far post the next chapter when you can

[shugo_lover]

Ok I will Its almost done

[Arisato]

gotcha