Another poem (Don't worry its as bad as you think it is)

[Darkmetrau]

Promise

As the night awakens from it's slumber
I shall make the unbrakable vow of love
A promise so binding
A promise so Bold

Our souls would colide
Our hearts will unite
Our minds will amurge side by side

I promise you my love
I promise to love you

For as long as my heart keeps beating

[Azalan]

Who are you making the promise too? Good job on the poem by the way. A bit short, but its great none the less. Perhaps I'll put my pen back to paper and write a poem. Did you read the one I did a few months ago? It was pretty good.