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I called it sex with chcocolate but I guess it could use a new title

Poem



Sex with chocolate



I love to unravel you with my finger tips

Your sweet smell of heavily wonders overloads my senses

As you start to crumble before me



I adore you,

As I playfully lick every inch of your glorious being

I feel you clutching to my tongue

Caressing each tender spot,



My taste buds dance along the liquid substance you leave behind.

As you press tightly to my raw lips

I close my self around you

I feel you swiftly melting under the heat which I bestow upon you.



I can hear you scream as my paws grip tightly around your bodies’ core

My whiskers twitch with delight has my claw moves up your creamy spine



My tail moves swiftly for more

My fur stands on end

As you enter my dark chambers once again



You’re growing thin your energy depleting before me

Your colour almost fading



My eyes wonder down to you frail state

I pick up the last reaming peace of you



The outer shell in which you hid in

I brush it up agents my nuzzley nose



And breathe in the essence of your soul

So now I know I devoured you whole


(note i am not here to start a drama war)

This was disturbing and it made Shadow and I cringe. However it was well written and a good read. Good Job. So, what have you been up to for the time you've been gone dark?

Sorry about that Azalan I've been trying to develope new ways to wright poems instead of my old dark ghothic stuff from before I will try better next time

hey it's ok. I was just a little weirded out that's all. It's a good poem though. I don't think you've gotten rusty at all.