New Azure Knights

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can be better
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Keyaki
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New Azure Knights

Post by Keyaki »

i made up my own group of Azure Knights that arent AIs.

Okay there were three players in The World R:2. One was a Twin Sowrd, the onther was a Brandish, and the last one was a Blade. Anyway they were really strong each of their levels were 150. They were awesome PKKs.Almost as awesome as Haseo when he was the Terror of Death. They couldnt get Pked by ANYONE.They were also awesome Arena Rankers. They always faught in the Sage Palace and they were always the No.1 rankers in the Arena, however they could never beat Haseo because of his Xth Form. Though, they could never beat Haseo in the Arena ...they really didnt care if they became the Emperor they just wanted to fight. They were so strong as PKKs and Arena Rankers that each one of them obtained their own title. The Twin Sword was called the Knight of the Azure Flame. The Blade was called the Knight of the Azure Sky and the Brandish was called the Knight of the Azure Sea. They then formed the group called the 3 Azure KNights
But then there was a Multi-Weapon thats was an awesome PKK and recently became No.2 arena ranker and as strong as Haseo just like the 3 Azure KNights.
The Multi-Weapon beat all 3 of the Knights in a 3-1 fight and the 3 Azure Knights decided to make the Multi-Weapon the leader of the group and the Multi-Weapon was given the name KNight of the Twilight and they also made a guild. Later they found a Steam Gunner and a Flicker that wwere both lv 150 and recently became No.3 in the SagePalacea and were as strong as Haseo and were Awesome PKKs and were recruited into the guild. The FLicker was then given the name Kinght of the Azure Darkness and the Steam Gunner was given the name Knight of the Azure Light. The guild then vowed to stop the chaotic state that The World R:2's Pk system is under.
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Post by Vlaidmare »

Other than some grammatical and spelling errors, it's a great story! ^_^
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Post by Clockwerk »

The story seemspretty good so far! Good work!
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Post by Multi-edge »

Sure. Just add details, like what they look like, names, personalities and other random stuff. Other than that, good.
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Post by Keyaki »

Vlaidmare wrote:Other than some grammatical and spelling errors, it's a great story! ^_^
Sorry aboyut the grammer i was rushing^^
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Post by Keyaki »

I came up wit the personallities for he kNights. The Flicker ( Knight of the Azure Darkness) ihas sort of a mischevious, bad-tempered,stubborn personality but he is always ready to fight for his friend. The Twin Sword ( Knight of Azure Flame) has a king-hearted personality. The Multi-Weapon ( KNight of the Twilight) has a gentle personality but if he gets angry WATCH OUT. The Brandish (Knight of the Azure Sea) has serious personality. He is serious about almost everything. The Blade ( Knight of the Azure Sky) has a quiet personality, he barely talks and he espically hates PK. The Steam Gunner ( Knight of the Azure Light) perfers solitude. He always wants to be by himself.

Im currenlty thinking about their names but thast the hardest part
HELP PLEASE!!!
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Re: New Azure Knights

Post by fatgaspard »

Don't double post k?
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