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Is it good?

yeah, good
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Cool story, bro
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I've seen better, but it's fine
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(And, to be more fair) It's bad
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kai the pkk
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Re: Persona

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Akira: Wa- { before Akira finish what he says he sees her waves and he then waves back}....Allright then I'll head back to the dorms { he walks back to the dorms and he walks inside} sigh { he walks to his room and he places his back on his desk as he kicks his shoes off and he falls down onto his bed}.....ahhhh bed....OH CRAP THEIR WAS A MEETING TODAY! { he throws his sneakers back on as he runs to the meeting room}...{ he see's mitsuru irritated at him as usual}....ehhh heh { he sits down quietly}
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AZURE-KITE
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Re: Persona

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(sorry for the delay guys, usual homework, but i see i got to the meeting part, also from now on, y'all can control the other p3 chars, but i char per people, i'll take Mitsuru)
Mitsuru Glared at Akira, as Minato walks in "Oh, minato, good to see you, if the others don't come in five minutes we'll just go, ok?, also, i heard from a boy of your school some rumors about Yukari and-" Minato just made a signal, like telling her 'silence', then Turned to Akira "'lo" he sitted in a chair "Take a seat Akira" mitsuru sitted down "Now, while the others come, why don't you prepare yourselves and know eachother better? you'll need it"..
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Re: Persona

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((If we're doing it like that, then I guess i'll mostly control Yukari, if anyone from P3.))

It was only a few minutes after Akira's entry that a slightly out of breath Analise ran into the meeting room. "Sorry! I had to go do something and then things ended up taking longer than it should have..." Analise trailed off, realizing that she was prolonging things, and just quietly sat down to let the meeting begin. She sighed a little before waiting with everyone else.
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kai the pkk
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Re: Persona

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( I'll take akihiko)

Akira: Oi Mitsuru Senpai what is this about how come we were called here { he looks at Minato} hey there how u doin by the way { he looks back towards mitsuru}

Akihiko: sorry Im late Mitsuru { he strolls in leisurely and he sits down} wow must be some big meeting
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AZURE-KITE
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Re: Persona

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"fine" minato replied to akira, as mitsuru looks as the last dorm member in there "well, let's start" mitsuru walked into the center (Sorry kai, but i'll control akihiko in this post, if you played p3 you'll know what to do) "we'll go today visit tartarus" she walks to the doors "follow me.." minato stood up and followed mitsuru, along with the others (also, if y'all wanna talk but' something while walking you can do it a la flashback) "here we are" said mitsuru, as she points at the school "Huh? but this is our school" said minato "Just wait a little bit" said akihiko as he looks at his cell phone, as the hour marks 12:00Am, then the school starts turning into a gigantic tower "this is tartarus... come on i'll explain all inside"
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"Wait, our School is Tartarus!?" Yukari said to no one in particular as the group entered. Inside, the first floor was empty, mostly dominated by a single, huge stairway that seemed to go far too high to lead anywhere.

Analise looked around in relative silence at the whole thing. After learning about her the cause of her troubles and the incident earlier, it would take more than this to surprise her now. "So this is Tartarus... the source of my troubles..." she said quietly to herself as she waited for Mitsuru to begin explaining things.
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AZURE-KITE
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Re: Persona

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(bump, also, if you wanna add something between the lines, go ahead!)
Mitsuru started talking "now, we have enough people to start exploring tartarus, but first we have to declare a leader" then junpei interrupted "Ohhh, me, me, me m--pick me!" "agh..." akihiko said "you're in charge" then pointed to Minato "hey, but, he doesn't seem like a leader!" "but he HAD fought them before" yukari added "you serious?!" "and that's not the only reason" akihiko said "can you summon your persona without difficulties? like he can?"(Aki) "o-of course!"(junpei) "well, now why don't you get a feel of this place?"(mitsuru) "by ourselves?"(yukari) "yes, also, the structure of tartarus changes every day so outside support is neccesary" misuru said Minato then saw a blue door, entered it, and after some talking with Igor(velvet room, no one else can see the door, i don't wanna put all the conversation cuz i'm lazy :P) he received the velvet Key, then Yukari said "hey, is everything alright?" "uh, yeah" minato answered, then junpei striked "So you just doze off!?, you're s'posed to be our leader man!"

((also, from now on, if y'all don't answer important things with chars like yukari akihiko junpei and so, i'll control them ONLY in the post i make, don't worry i'll be in-game story based things(how they happen in persona 3) so i won't move them much, also, if y'all are ready to go exploring, talk to Mitsuru))
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