.Hack 11th Phase

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Is this topic good ( as in good i mean is it what you like enjoy )

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Could use some things ( if so PM me )
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Uh Yes and No ( Maybe depends if it gets better )
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Wavemaster
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Post by Wavemaster »

Kurogane bearly recalled anything from when the AIDA took over,
all he could remember was something was happening faster then expected... as the swirling darkness around him died down
His body fell onto a small fragment of the field that was left from where his standing, his data serious damage from some unseen events

He laid there fightning to kept conciseness
As a light appeared around him he glazed onto its source
'Am...am...am i...free...yet?' he manage to whisper softly
he was answered with
Not yet, sorry A girl's voice echoed back
Time to rest...rest where all are safe

Kurogane tried to reframe himself from crying, he reached out his hand towards the light to grasp something...then his body when limp an motionless, turning grey

His body laid there for what seem like forever then turning into a black glowing ball of light raising into the sky then shooting out into the distant horizen, leaving his twin kanatana blades impalled in the rock.....
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Post by kite//sugo »

( I know i shouldn't be asking this b/c i made the topic i should know whats going on but i don't WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON !? )
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Post by kite//sugo »

( I'l just start off from my last post on page 11 )

Tri-Skieth sighed then Vezik took teh body over, Vezik left the area but before he did he deleted the area. Vezik then left the area to look for the others but since the others could be anywhere he just went to root town to root town.
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