.hack//finder ( somewhat intermediate rp)

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What do you think of the story at first glance? (please answer before you go)

GREAT!
1
17%
good
3
50%
bad
0
No votes
IT SUCK'S!
1
17%
need's improovment, i`ll pm you
1
17%
 
Total votes: 6

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(you might have to edit :( )

"One more!" as I stab my jiko into it and it's geliten type body dissapeared. Instead a beast type monster was standing there in it's place. "Ligal ahead procced with caution" said a computer type voice. "All right I haven't had this much fun in a while. I see, I see I see! QUENZEL!!". At that point my cresture (remember to pm me), a big dragon beast of some sort came into battle. "Alright let's go!" as I charged.
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((I'm good, edited :o)
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This is a small one I said in thought, so I just went to it and riped the ligal right out of it. Then I transform back into Hitiyama.
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I'm so In!
Name: Cloud
Level:95
Class: Dual Gunner, Flick Reaper, and Blade Brandier
Guild: Shadow Storm (Guild Master)
Apperance:Image
Jiko: God Spear ( Flick Reaper Weapon)
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Cloud logged into the area and started to fight monsters that were infected by GAL.
He kept on fighting until his HP withered down so much that he needed help.
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(you can't already have ligal's because then there would be no point in .hack//finder)

(in the poll when it say's "needs improovement, i'll pm you" that means you will pm me, fatgaspard, on your take)
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Alright i edited
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"Whoa" I said as I pointed to a character named cloud, he was apperantly fighting a GAI. "I got to help him". At that moment something I thought never possible happen, a cresture. "I change, I grow, ALCHEMY"!
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Name:Misao
Level:???
Class:???
Apperance:Image
Guild:-Indepentdent
Other optional stuff: An AI who likes to battle and is the current Sage Palace Empress
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:shock: was all I could do as this person exellently tamed his cresture. But out of the coner of my eye I saw a girl running. I turn to target her and talk but all I could do was get a name. "That's odd" I said as she teloported out of the area. Aftere the day in the field I reseached the name as much as I could, but all that came up was that she was the sage place emperess. "I got to fight her" I said and then I got a short mail from CCorp. 'There is high GAI signal at the sage palce tornament'. "No I have to fight!" I said. Then I went to Dol Dona to wait for sayuri and mikaelis.
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Misao ran to the Arena "Gotta defend my title" she said hoping over a random PC "OK I made it in time" she said sighing "Now I have to fight" she said as she went to the waiting room. "So there's two boys and a girl" she said warping into the Arena "AND NOOOOOOOW IT"S MISAO OUR AREN CHAMP" the announcer yelled as she entered "Well thanks for the applause" She said as the crowd roared "AND HER OPPENENTS ONLY 1 TARGET 3" he said quiting everyone down "MATCH BEGIN" Misao attacked the twin blade first and beat him in one hit bare handed "They are all so weak" she said as she attacked the edge punisher then the team leader who was a blade brandier "AND THE WIIIIIINNER IS MISAO" he announcer said as she left "PC's are so weak" she said noticing an odd player "Who's zat" she said running off
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"Hitiyami, what are you talking about? Infection in Lumina Cloth? The sage palace?"

He rushed to follow after Hitiyami. Warping to Lumina Cloth and looking around for obvious signs of GAI infection.

"This is kind of annoying, now I'm seperated from everyone. I shouldn't jump around so quickly when I hear the word GAI..."

He walked up to the arena, and sat down on the stairs. He slumped down and rested his staff against his shoulder and waited for his friends to show up.

"Man, sometimes I hate myself for doing things like this." he thought that he had messed up in some way, so he slumped down even further.

"Damn, I hate this."
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"There you are" I said as I saw mikaelis. "You need to wait sometimes, and besides we were going to go train. Not rush in and charge at a possible AI" I said trying to cheer him up. "Plus we aren't even sage requirment guy, gosh lol".

"So how 'bout we go train, w'atda ya say, eh :D ".
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Not noticing Mikaelis she steps on him and continues running off and warps to Mac Anu "I fell like I did something wrong" she said sitting down "Oh yeah I forgot my winning reward" she said running back and stepping on him again "Um I won and I think I get a reward right" she said to the lady at the arena counter "Yes you do" she said giving her rare Staff "I don't need this" she said running off stepping on him again and dropping her weapon on him "Now to go back to Mac Anu"
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He loged out.

"Hmmph" is all could say.

Short mail: 'GAI signal in data ping, horses, back'

Well I better go I thought."*sigh* I wish I had more party members. I know! I'l post a forum!"
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Mikaelis was just sitting on the steps when he finally noticed that Hitiyami had logged out.

"Wait, why do I have footprints on my back?" He tried to figure out why he was being used as a staircase when he realized that he was sitting in the middle of the stairs.

"Man, this sucks. Who would just step all over me like that?"

He got up and leaned against the lamp post, and waited for Hitiyami to log back in again.
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As I brose though lumina cloth I spot mikaelis.

"Hey it's urgent come, now" I said in a stern voice.
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After reading Hitiyama's post he decided to take up on his offer.
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Re:Party Members
From: Cloud
I would like to be your party member, i'll meet you at Lumina Cloth.
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After that Cloud logged into Lumina Cloth
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"What's the issue?" Mikaelis asked, raising his head and looking at Hitiyami. "GAI?"

He got off the post and picked up his staff. He was wondering what would make Hitiyami speak with such a serious tone.

"Is it really bad this time? Or do we just have a meeting or something?"

He figured it was just a meeting, not wanting to jump to conclusions and get ahead of himself again.

"Alright, lead on man, that's why I'm here."
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Before I went to Dol Dona I heard a voice. "Hey. Hey. Hey wait up" it repeated. "Hey your that one cloud guy right". I hand him my member address. "Now come it's urgent".
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" Ok, but what's so urgent?"
He didn't have enough time to reply, it was as if he was racing for his own life.
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