BlackLightning

[BloodyCareTaker]

This is a book a wrote it's not done I will infact update this post when I make new chapters.

BlackLightning Series


Prolouge
The moon glistened in the nighttime sky spreading it's light across the forest. A man was running through the forest as a howl of a wolf echoed of the trees of the forest. The man looked behind himself constantly as if he were being chased. The problem is he was. The man looked behind himself once more but when he looked back he slammed into a tree. He fell over in pain and tried to keep from crying. The man looked up ad saw a flash of lightning but it wasn't the normal color of lightning. It was black! And he could see it clearly then he heard thunder. It was going to rain He got back up to keep running but as he began to ran he ran into something, but this time it wasn't a tree. This time it was big muscular and fury. It had a muzzle and sharp claws and red eyes and it stood up on it hind legs. The man backed up with terror in his eyes. The creature grabbed the man by the neck his claws sinking into the mans neck. The man cried out in pain. The creature slammed the man against wthe tree."you thought you could let my secret go couldn't you?" growled the creature. The man shook his head no."Lies!" 
yelled the creature then it through the man onto the ground. The beast stuck it's claws far into the mans neck killing him in only seconds. The creature looked down on the body and slowly walked away laughing to itself while the rain drops spattered against the lifeless body of the man.

Chapter 1
Blade Mitchell walked slowly to school. He along with many other people have been cautious like crazy since they mysterious deaths. Recently police investigators have found the body of David Shepherd in LakeHound forest. There appeared to be deep gashes along his neck that seemed to be caused by claws. The news reporters voice repeated that story over and over in his head. Once he arrived to school he walked through the doors and to his locker. As he opened it his friend Michael ran up to him:"Hi Blade!" he said excitedly."why are you so happy?" asked Blade putting his books into his locker."I dunno." replied Michael. Blade's eyebrow went up and he let out a amused huff. Michael looked confused."what?" asked Michael."you are the weirdest person on earth." replied Blade."cmon let's get to class before we get into trouble and at that both of them headed of to class unaware that two red eyes where watching them from the front door.

Chapter 2
Blade and Michael walked out the front door of the school."school was quiet today." said Michael. Blade nodded his head."they had police officers patrolling the school like every two seconds. Michael let out a huff and kept walking until they reached Blade's house."see you later!" called Michael as Blade walked in to his house. Blade nodded at him and walked into his house. Blade dropped his backpack on the ground and ran upstairs to his bedroom. When he opened the door someone appeared to be in his bed. He slowly walked up his bed and pulled down the sheets and gasped in horror. Michael was laying in his bed dead with deep gashes in his neck witch appeared to be made by claws."but that's impossible!" exclaimed Blade to himself or so he thought."oh is it?" asked a voice behind him. It was the voice of Michael. Blade turned around."but ho-" Blade was cut off when Michael began to change. He all of a sudden grew large muscles and fur then a muzzle sprouted from his face and his eyes turned red and sharp pointy ears grew from his head. Blade*staggered back and fell on the body of the real Michael. The creature walked up to him and picked him up and through him on the ground lightly. The slammed him into the wall also lightly. *he's playing with me he'll finish me when he's ready*. He thought. Then when the beast through him down. Blade got up and ran and dove out the window. He landed on his side and rolled. Then he got up and started running an the only thing he could hear was the sound of heavy footsteps of something chasing him.
 

[Uberlisten]

It's good, but i'm pretty sure we've already established this inrl :U

[shugo_lover]

It's ok I guess. Not much character developement though, but thats just my oppinion.